Gray_stone3
It's not a bad fic. It has good grammar and has a somewhat balanced system. It follows canon very closely, the only qualitative change so far is Shmi being rescued, though that hasn't really changed anything else. With the bounty hunting tag I was hoping for a bounty hunter fic like the mandalorian, but this is sadly not it. This is more of a "si-follows-the-main-cast-fic" as they go through canon. You can see some hints that the author can write more freely and I hope the author dares to spread his wings and fly outside canon.
This is very well done. Great writing quality, but I might just be saying that because half the authors on this site can barely form an English sentence. The self insert fits in with the other characters well and the story development is pretty good. The power balance of the universe hasn't been completely ****ed yet. I've been enjoying this novel, so far. I look forward to reading future chapters.
It's an easy read, nothing clever and very straightforward. It's a good story to read if you want to avoid thinking. MC gets a system, knows events, and proceeds to change nothing. Its a pleasant read, just too boring and cliche for me personally. Its obvious its written for fun and that helps keep the story upbeat.
Moser chapters pls ππππππππππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππππππβ€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€β€ππππππππππππ
I gave up on the novel because the protagonist said I don't want to kill, if even before the fights you already have this thought, imagine when the time comes to kill, believe the opponents will not give up a chance like this, I wouldn't, if you get in a fight and are not willing to kill so you are already dead and for me the protagonist has already died, in those words.