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Boring. His shadow clones is useless and mc is stupid and the most annoying is he is still 2 yrs old @.@.@@..@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@..@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.-.@.@.@.@.@.@@.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.@.-.@.@.--.@.
This novel fucking sucks. The writing quality can be just summed up - 99% of the time you can't even understand the plot because the author loves to jump from thought to thought. Don't trust the reviews - 4.5 rating? wtf kinda bull**** is this? Is this a ****ty translation of a promising novel or an original ? I can't fucking tell, its that fucking bad.
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I just binge read this ...its just trash... I don't understand the good reviews even if they give me money, I wont rate it more than 1 - it starts with stupid mc - bad wish (which author takes to crazy lengths but still everyone is ok) - this just tarnish Tony's legacy - he is required by god to not change the story .. so he kept doing nothing for many thing, then he choose to fu*k story and go do stupid stuff - all mc cares about is beauties\women - stupid character development and no world building - 1D characters all over the place - bad dialog and worst grammars and spellings - indian things injection into story .... and a lot more, its just too much to tell, I've seen a lot in this, 100 times I said I'll leave this bad story but still continued just to not wrong this story and the people who rated this as good... I said maybe they've seen things I didn't see yet ... but it turned out they are just stupid and I've wasted my time
I'm highly entertained with this fic and just when you think its losing some of its novelty, the travel to one of the best possible crossover worlds happens in a smooth as silk way that completely blows other crossovers between those two realities out of the water. Whilst the author does seem to be learning on the go, I'm way over a hundred chapters in, and I can tell you that he applies the lessons he learned whilst writing it well. I really REALLY look forwards to the next chapters in this fic.
The author has shown great amounts of effort in combining the various histories of different facets of marvel verse, and has done a rather good job creating a coherent history of these parts combined. I especially liked one of the more recent bits concerning the MC hiring special ability people into his company. A possible dorection for the story is global monoply of all prodction sectors which includes medicine as well. Suggest beginning a company in that area soon. Overall great read and we by ch 77 still have not reached Iron Man 1. Impressive.
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The quality is terrible itβs in this weird limbo betwixt a play and an decent novel. The characters especially at the beginning come off as stiff, all explaining their thoughts verbally. There is a saying Iβm sure anyone who has taken an English class could tell you. SHOW DONT TELL! I want the story to show me not just say, βAnd then X, Y, Z happened!β I want them to show how X occurs through character observation, Y to be perhaps complained about, and Z to be implied.
I was totally into this fic at first, but now i realize i was kinda deluding myself. This is such a wonderful idea but poorly executed. Heβs doing crazy **** as a kid and no one is like wtf theyβre all like okay tony iβll do what you want. The writing is pretty poor with characters speaking their thoughts instead of you showing me what i need to see.