Too early to do a full review, so I'll just mention a couple of strengths.
The writing is the strong point. Descriptions of things are varied, clear and enjoyable.
The pacing seems pretty good so far, the chapters felt full but not unnecessarily long.
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Great plot love the characters, the description, good work in jotting this down it's really great work, would love to see more chapters coming up, Keep it up, author! Please update soon!