Diamond_Air
I must applaud the author for such a refreshing novel. this is a nice piece and I can see it going really far. I've read only 5 chapters thus far but it still is quite amazing how I'm drawn into the world with ease. looking forward to more exciting chapters as I read on a few grammatical errors to take care of and that's the only problem i have with the work. nice one author đ
Really love the concept! An ancient magic sword finding itself in an 80's style sci-fi world? That is just cool! Unfortunately, your writing doesn't do the story justice yet. The pacing is a bit off, with grammatical errors, run-on sentences and an overuse of ellipses (...). The characters are fun and you've defined their personalities rather well, so that's going for you. I look forward to seeing how you improve. Keep it up!
In all honesty, I really like the start up of your work. The moment that the mistress died in the first part was exquisitely well-done! No words can truly describe how happy I am reading such a wonderful chapter/story. It's even better than "I was reincarnated as a sword", for me HAHAHA The only things that I can advise are you need to edit the commas and periods in sentences. There are a few of them out there, so be sure to keep an eye out of them. Another thing worth mentioning is...nah, actually, the story is good. I like it. I like it alot. Keep up the good work, mate!
Wow! Sci-Fi! I loved science, but here is wondrous! But I'm into mystery and horror, this story can give someone interest your taste. It was like an Action Movies, great wars are difficult to write most in the battles. But hey, who knows that you can write the most detailed battle ever? This is a great story author! Keep up the good work! :)
A unique and nice novel, the grammar is good, couldn't find any mistakes. The story is developing in a satisfactory phase, which is not too slow or not too fast, keeping readers like me engaged. The sci-fi plot is amazing, I liked the mc, and the other side characters introduced till now. I will be rooting for the novel!
Welp, here I am giving my own novel a five star rating... pretty odd but I have no choice, I need those ratings and reviews so bad. Anyway, I thought I'd be dropping this right after the contest ended but the ideas just raided my mind and I can't stop typing... For my other book, I simply feel lazy. I can't really assure frequent updates since I'm always busy... but then, I hope you stick around to find out what'll happen to our MC in the very end.
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