Dude....before starting I would like to say that I love harem!!!! But a harem without any proper story..........not. I think that you should try to write this novel on a proper foundation i.e., Slice of life of Mc. Do you know that readers come to like an MC by seeing his daily life? They like the MC when they can understand him/her. I also want to say that I also don't like MC catching women like pokemons.
First of all I like how the story is progressing so far and I hope you don't drop it. now the next thing is about the harem I honestly love harem and romance novels so I don't mind if you made a harem but you have to keep in mind that if you make a huge harem then the story would not go that well so keep it small or medium depends on you actually , next try to create a health relationship with the girls and not just them being dolls for sexual purpose (this would be hard but don't stress about it) , we don't mind if you did a few chapter on them also. Next superman has a lot of weakness like kryptonite ,magic, red sun etc you get it right, so try to have him build resistance against it if possible thank you [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp]
I overall liked your story, but there were some moments where I didn't like, but at the end, I am getting content for free, so I am in no place to complain, if possible I would like you to focus a bit more on supes mental powers but so far I am liking it. So here are some 5 stars to cheer you up and motivate you to write more good content for us.
I like this story I think it has potential. The author is taking an interesting angle on the Superman story. I often thought that Superman was to much of a do gooder their were things that he could have done that anyone would do. For example I do think Superman should have a large harem that he loves. These women would be one way to keep him grounded and less likely to turn to the Dark Side.
it was a good story though it wasn't any different from any of the other "reincarnated into DC" fanfictions I've read before. it wasn't very exciting and the whole harem aspect could've worked if MC stopped being a pervert (is it technically pedophilia if he's a kid too?) the writing was good and simple though I prefer more details so I can really experience the story (it wasn't bad though).