Reviews of Reincarnated As Mizuki
Reincarnated As Mizuki
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Shameless Author here to endorse myself! I am a first time writer so the novel is probably gonna be a little bit shaky in some parts. I based the novel on the thought that if a weeb was reincarnated as some random shinobi, what would they do? So, being the dumbass that I am I decided to write a novel about it. Hope you all enjoy the ride!
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This fanfic is just slice of life type of naruto, where the mc is average if i say. This is also not an op mc. This story is just slow paced type of story. Where the author focuses on friendship, relationship and peers. If you dont want an op mc then dont read. I myself is dissapointed. Well god bless..
I like it itβs different to the other naruto fanfictions this will either be great or flop. Right now ots looking good a lot of potential mc is above average but can be op if he is cunning and smart enough. He will need to make more friends like guy for body and uchia guy for traveling fast e.t.c to absorbe their techniques Gl author and keep them chapters comming release rate is great atm
Normally i dont give one star reviews but i just couldn't stop myself. There are various problems with this. First, and this may be subjective to me, this fanfic made me cringe alot. And not in a good way. Second, the timeline is a mess. Characters are in places where they shouldnt be yet and meet other characters at a time where it would have been impossible. Third, the whole story just feels like a wish fullfillment of the author, which is an okay thing to do, but it has been a bad read for me and I just couldnt enjoy it. The setting and the idea where great, but the execution left me Disappointed. There are also spelling and grammar errors. sometimes missing words, which just disturb the readability. I hope the author improves with this experience for i can see that he is creative with his ideas.
Unlike much of the gibberish on this site not only is this story in legible English, but the author also did not make the main character instantly op. Some strong points in this story are: -The author spends time to breath life into the other characters in his story. -The mc while not instantly op is on the path to power unlike some other wimp mcs. -The author makes every bit of the story somewhat interesting, so I don't find myself wanting to skip any parts of the story unlike other fanfics that can feel dull at times. I hope the author doesn't drop the novel like so many other authors have done to fics in the SI genre. The only real downside is that updates seem rather sporadic.
