Rebuilt_Kitsunii
So, the story is really good, like really good, it's not your 'classic' reincarnation story where the mc just gets cheats out of nowhere and has insane plot armor with super luck, also, just by not having a f*ucking HAREM, this story is already better than most isekais out there, let's summarize this shall we ? No grammar errors and easy to read story. ✔️5⭐ Fully original isekai for once ✔️5⭐(story development) Regular updates ✔️ 5⭐ The world is a classic fantasy world of swords and magic from what I read. 4⭐ Sadly I dropped this story because I didn't like the mc, don't misunderstand me though, the mc has a really well built personnality, it's just that I couldn't recognise myself in the mc because we just don't have the same personnality, we are incompatible so I won't continue a story that I am not able to enjoy (it's as if you try to play mobile games on a pc, it just isn't as enjoyable on emulator as the real thing because the apps aren't made for pc use) So that's why I gave 3 ⭐ to character design but if I were to rate it objectively and not based on my tastes then it would be a 5⭐ immediatly just for the fact that the mc isn't either full white or full black like a goody two shoes/hero/good samaritan or pure evil/brainless/revenge driven/or people who want to prove they aren't trash(like most CN mcs). That makes it 4.4 ⭐ rated on my tastes and 4.6⭐ if not.
Pretty good! I just kinda stumbled along this, not been on the site for long but I like eating up webnovels like this. A little interesting, definitely a bit better written than some other webnovels I’ve seen. I like the characters already. A bit heavy handed on the smut off the bat, you could probably make a decent pornographic short story with that kinda stuff (lol). All in all, I do like it. Setting is your classic fantasy setting. Humans are numerous and racist (as they should be). MC is half-beast instead of full human. I smell a harem coming on, though I would prefer it small if only to save the author a headache in the future to try to remember all the characters they’d make. In some stories, there’s so many characters that they all feel one dimensional. It’s best to flesh out few main characters than millions. Looking forwards to see where this goes.
Haha, I tried to give myself what I think to be a fair score. I just want to warn you guys, if you see this, that there's this irritating guy going around hating on a bunch of author's books because he doesn't like them. If you see one of his reviews here, you'll know who he is; just please read for yourself and form your opinion. As my lovely, intelligent readers, I'd ask you not to be dragged down by people who try to infect and stop people enjoying things they like.
Overall I enjoyed the story and felt it was worth spending the time reading. I feel that this is an author who has potential and look forward to future works from them. At times, the writing is awkward, and there are sections, especially early in the story, that feel out of place. Some events feel like they are forced and either dont belong or should have flowed differently. The reactions and feelings that several characters have feel wrong for what is going on, like they are dismissing of the events. World-building is definitely not a focus in this story, but there was enough there to understand what was going on and why they were happening.
hey author u are good at writing and I hope u continue. I'm very interested in where you will end up. I haven't read much yet though so I cant give u constructive criticism to help u. plus people who is straight up toxic in there criticism are not worth following it because a lot of the time they didn't even read it and because of ur bio here is a lot of love (hugs u tightly and kisses ur cheek with lots of cuddles)
To me the characters that the main cast interacts with all feel like they have a certain relevance for future events and also a personality. This coupled with very interesting Plot progression, unique character design and my kind of humor makes this novel one of my favourite novels I've read and has me looking forward to whenever a new chapter will be released.