Masquerade1010
I'd like to start by saying I usually don't start novels with less than 100 chapters. that being said this book hooked me from the start. the character grows more defined each chapter. and though the mc was formerly a male he quickly transitions into becoming accustomed to the new body. the authors writing style is what captures the attention as though you are present in the moment.
Let me start with the reason of the low score, First is the story, this is the cultivation type of world, but it feels like the author is trying to merge a isekai type of story, and a bad one, with a slow life. Conclusion, there is no bad choices for the MC just results. Second is the MC, this one is badly tought, i know i sound malicious but there is a reason. Memories. When combining the child and the male, there must be a change, minimal, but a change the same. Then there is the goddess, this is a heavy personality change, but the author doesn´t point it. Three, the cultivation realms, they sound good, but they are a miss, can´t remember, will never remember. Conclusion, author i recomend to ask someone for ideas that will make the story more linear with the intention wished, and to repair my points for the plot holes that they are.
The writing quality is... Poor. Not offensively so, but it's in that grey area where it's not hilariously bad or amazingly bad, it's just boringly low quality. If I could give partial stars, it'd be 2.5 on the dot. That aside, I've only read a few chapters, and I've been too distracted by the writing quality to properly notice much else.
Honest Review I've had this novel in my library for a while now and since I caught up on what I'm currently reading, I decided to read this and I've got to say I wish I read this sooner and a nice refreshing story, the world building is great, back story of characters, lovable main character and side. I'm glad I'm reading this now and hope the author will have regular releases and I'm willing to vote with my only 2 power stones at the moment. Keep up the GREAT WORK, you got this!
Interesting story so far, but I'm not sure if English is not the author's first language or if the chapters have just not been proofread. There are several errors that can be fixed by spending a bit of time proofreading along with decent knowledge of English. Overall the writing is understandable, though not the best. To potential readers, I would recommend trying to read the novel and seeing if you like it, but keep in mind the first 2 chapters are basically the background settings of the novel.