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Loving your story brother! The story has excellent plot twists, you will definitely get more attention if you wait a little- But, I hope your work definitely gets what it deserves! As a narrative- your story is finely carved, and it craves the reader to keep reading![img=update][img=update][img=update]

Perfect start for a Turkish writer hope to make it better and better for future chapters and finish with a great ending. Thanks bro for your big efford👍

I like it,  beginning chapter is not efficient but rest of the them is extraordinary. I especially wonder the story of army sections,  please add more characters from them

Fantastik bir hikaye sürükleyici anlatım heyecanlı farklı bölümler etkili anlatım keskin tasvirler ve betimlemeler ile detaylandırılmış okumaya başlayınca zamanı unutuyor insan kesinlikle yorucu ve sıkıcı değil....

That's fantastic. So nice storyand it is fluent writing. I want to say thank you to writer. I do not read something els long time as good like this.

Oldukça iyi ve farklı bir tarz karakterlerin işlenmesi derin olmuş ve ayrıca yan karakterler de arka planda kalmamış.fantastik türünü sevenler için güzel bir alternatif olmuş.

I liked the story very much. The story is simple but very effective. Congratulations to the friend who wrote. We expect the continuation of his work.

Fantastic literature in Turkey grew steadily. On the other hand there are not much Turkish writers in this area. This book is a gripping work written with good fiction. I hope it will continue.

Last 3 chapters are awesome. i m breathless now go on please, i kinda know that floating guys back ward too is he related to this exelnia world?

Guzel bir hikaye olmuş karakter sayısı biraz fazla geldi ara ara unutuyorum kim kimdi diye geriye dönüp bakmam gerekiyor karakter çeşitliliğini biraz sadeleştirmeniz gerekebilir.

I love this book. It made me really curious about how everything was gonna unfold.

Wow! This is the real definition of amazing. Especially after the beginning. I was just absorbed into the story without even knowing. I love it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Waaaaaaahhhhhh, action!!!!!!!! Although I have noticed just as the other readers too that there are some problems in constructing your sentences but other than that I looked forward to further development of the story. 😁😁😁😁, ah action (drowns in delusional fights recreated in head)

This story is good and I like that you gave terminology. This could be a hidden gem. But, there are grammar problems. Fragment sentences, missing punctuations, unclear wording, and some unneeded capitalization. I did see two contractions that I don’t think exist. Other than that, if you fix those mistakes, there will be something good here. Keep up the good work!

I liked this book, it was a little different from the other books. The background of the world is nice. I can see that the author has put a lot of thought in the background and characters.

This story is very nice in terms of character design and world background building. writer has very wide imagenation and is good at discription. The story and write has good potential. As story start to develop it will hook your intrest in it. All the characters are designed very careful and amazingly. Writer's updating stability is good. There sill chance in writing quality but that can be just neglect for now. Author can improve it in time. Overall I like the story. Give it a try.

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Harika!!!!!!!! 💐 İnce düşünülmüş detaylar akıcılık inanılmaz.. Detaylar ve gidişat özenle yazılmış. Bitirmek istemeyeceğiniz türden. Tebrik ederim 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Harika bir hikaye🤩çok etkileyici. Çok tebrik ediyorum. Hayal gücünüze sağlık, okuyucuları daha fazlası ile buluşturmanız dileğiyle🤗🤗🤗sevgiler

Hikaye çok iyi kaleme alınmış.Tebrik ederim bayıldım çok iyi yerlere gelmen dileğiyle :) Başarıların daim olsun yazma hevesin hiç bitmesin sevgilerle