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I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
Woooooaaahhhh!! What an amazing read! One of the best transmigration stories I have read. I see this story as transmigration rather than reincarnation, not sure why it is not in the tags. :D But either way it deserves at least 10 out of 5. 1. Writing Quality: Par excellence. Every word written is measured and congruent to the setting. No unnecessarily convoluted or flowery language, yet the style of the prose is great. Grammatical errors are minimal and I did note that there was some inconsistency in POV, but it was quite obvious that the author is re-editing and restructuring some parts of the story. 2. Stability of updates: regular 3. Story Development: The main story immediately starts but is not rushed at all. Perfect for transmigration. And the pacing is great. The MC and their progress over the course of their life is nicely show, and author takes their time to flesh everything out. 4. Character Design: Superb. Every single of the characters including the MC act like real people. There motivations are clear and they are super likeable too, oh, I mean the ones meant to be liked at least. XD 5. World Background: Great world building. Author is a wizard of description. Just the right amount and they never feel forced. Very intriguing. Thank you so much author for the great read. I will keep following your story! <3
The fantasy genre is not my cup of tea. But this story intrigued me to read further. the writing style is well written and the use of words is remarkable. Very promising main protagonist. I like how the story is developing in each chapter while reading it. Definitely recommended for reading. Great work, Author! All the best for the book. I hope you shine and reach great heights.
Lately all i see are edgy novels like this... the cruelty towards the mc is unrealistic and exaggerated. Everything is forced and seems artificial... a chapter or two is all it takes to set up a scenario. However, this novel is rushed and artificial My impression, this is not story telling but the author rambling to themself
the story is wonderfully written although some might say that it can be a bit cliché and predictable at the very start. However, there's a good reason cliche's liked. they never go out of style, as long as it's well written. however, the way it was portrayed and the storytelling is wonderful that I have no problem with reading this novel at all. Well done author. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.
Okay! So, this story is GREAT! I am really, really enjoying it so far. The world building is EXCELLENT! There are so many Easter eggs (I think that's what they're called), its like I'm a kid again. I can't wait to read on and find out more! I highly recommend this book to any fantasy lover! Read it!
Well, let me start out by admitting - fantasy ain't really my genre. So as i began reading, i wasn't expecting much to be honest - it's a flaw i'm willing to admit. BUT I suddenly realized, that i had read 8 chapters just like that, which startled me a little. The storytelling is very good, there's a few grammar errors, but nothing that can't be changed in later edits. I love Alystar, and the world the author build around the MC. As a critique, i would say that the chapters are a bit short - will recommend the author to make them a bit longer, but that's just my preference. Thank you for your novel <3
This is one of the best examples of a novel that I have to read. With the grammar and vivid narration, this is so fluent to read. I gotta learn more from this author's works and maybe I will improve by leaps and bounds. Thanks for the wonderful experience of reading your work, your fan here. Peace ✌️
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