sagorika_adhikari
Hmmmm.... Is it illegal to create a second review? Because if it is i'mma bout to head to court for it. My first review was only after 3 chapters and I didn't give it the full glory like it truly deserved. So I will leave a second review here (Full 5) to show the great improvement the story has gone through since its beginning. First off, I love the chracters. They are charismatic and extremely enjoyable to read. Especially Bai Chang and Hu (Hu low-key reminds me of myself) *Cough* I love when books use strong female characters because a lot of the time ppl portray them as weak and I believe women can do anything a man can if they put their mind to it. Secondly, the writing style is simply amazing. The flow of your words is like a neatly made fountain (Yes a little poetic here). The descriptions are really good when it comes on to the characters but I think the world background could use just a tad more detail to emphasize each setting. Otherwise story deserves the full 5 from me. Great job and great improvement from the first time. Hope you keep at it💯💯
Hello Readers, I thought to put up the 50th review myself. Welcome to the story and I promise from my side, that the story gets better & better with each passing chapters. There is romance surrounded by the mystery of the past and future. Hop on the bandwagon of Sci-fi, hackers, coders & science geeks all encompassed in a fluffy romance and a behind the scene war; between Father & Son, on who gets to spend more time with our MC, Bai Chang.
There are some key factors that i like and dislike about this book. 1) i like the transmigration from future to past. 2) i like how she’s already married with a kid. Plus the interaction from father to child. I guess that’s just the plot. 1) I don’t like how this story is written in first point of view. I guess that’s just preference. It’s a little weird for a story because there’s a clear distinction between reader and character. For example, if a scene was acted out with the protagonist laughing, we as the viewer literally see that. In a story format in first point of view, the reader will be reading “I laughed”. I find that very off putting because i didn’t laugh. I don’t know if you get what i mean. I think third point of view(he/she/(name)/they) will be a better option. 2) Grammar and coherence. Some sentences can be structured more fluently so it can flow better.
This is a very interesting piece. I highly recommend this. It's not like the other cliché story and it something that would make you keep up from reading. Although, there are few things to improve like the Point of View of each characters, the Author's writing is improving on every chapter. Good job, sagorika-san! Keep you up the good work.
I was really sad that only 20 chapters are out but I know i should be patient. However, this book is sooo good! I love the Female lead she is awesome and im glad she’s opening up to her son and husband. I want them to be a happy family! Author please update soon🥺I’ll die from waiting😔Also thank you for releasing such master peice😌🤩🤍
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