The10thCrow
Please comment on what you think about the story and what can I improve.๐ฆ๐ฌ๐ฐ๐ฌ๐๐พ๐ฌ๐พ๐พ๐ฐ๐ป๐๐ฐ๐๐พ๐ป๐๐ค๐ฎ๐๐พ๐ป๐ค๐๐ฐ๐ ๐ค๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ป๐ค๐๐ฐ๐ ๐พ๐ป๐ค๐ฐ๐ค๐ ๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐๐ ๐๐ฆ๐ฌ๐ฆ๐ฌ๐ฐ๐ ๐๐๐ฐ๐๐ก๐ก๐๐ฐ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ฐ๐ ๐ก๐ฐ๐๐ณ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ฐ๐
nice start, wish owner of the body is some kind of legendary human and takes over hahahaa........................... awesome synopsis ...........................................................................................................................................................................