Andrewstewart002
Abort mission I repeat Abort mission Run for your lives, save what's left out of it and do not read this ------------------------------------ it was pain in my brain, I was reading and felt so inconsistent after ch2 I continued while not really knowing who is the mc... is it Aditia (an indian name in japanese anime) or Isehee( Issei by how the author like to call him) you wont understand anything and your brain would be polluted with something that looks like english but without meaning.
I usually don't criticize but I had expectations for this novel. Now I'm feeling so confused..............I kept going thinking it will get better mostly because I am a dxd fan.....................................I was wrong, so disappointed...........I think my brain broke. 1 star for effort I guess.
DONT READ THIS if u want some nice proper plot and story Read few chap,, now gonna drop this,, not worth tomread imo,, 1 chap copy from i think akikansomething author novel, 2nd chap it wierd,, systen, dathum, and cultivation? Just poping out of nowhere(ch 1 only ask 5 wish saiyan, sword, good look, dimension travel and gravity seal) after few line skip to ch 3 and barery read many grammar n error its like copy edit and insert few naw alot of random thing
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