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overall i really like this book, the world building and story progression is good, and it is one of the few web novels with systems that are actually good, the system isn't bratty or smug and does its job when it needs to. The protagonist too is good, he feels like a person that can actually exist and have overall good personality. So in conclusion give this story a try, its some of the few good ones in this site (i am writing this review to motivate the author as i am genuinely hooked up to the story and don't want this to be dropped) (sry for my english, its not my first language)
Hoping that the author could see this. Im truly amazed on how the author used certain rare words here and I enjoyed the story line a bit. Though the chapters are quite not up to date for the most part but I believe if this book were to be given enough time accumulating chapters after chapters, it will surely attain the recognition it deserves. I hope the author wont forget about the system in the near future chapters.
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Everything was good until the character Día came into play. Story started deviating towards something unknown and narrow. I only wish the story will be good in future. But the story seems to be out of my play. World background is not clear and sudden appearance of characters make it hard for me to follow. The characters don't have any substance but they are there in the story.
Great work. Just need more frequent updates....... . . v..... . . .. . . . . . .. v.. . .. v.v.. v.. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . v.v... . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . .. ... .. .. . .. . .. .. . . .. . .. . . .. .