Reviews of Reborn princess: I will change my ill-fate

Oh this is a reincarnation story, I didn't read the tags and I was surprised to read the FL being executed ._. I like the idea and jumping between different perspective of the characters to get the big picture of the story, but sometimes I got confused in the middle due to the jumping from here to there. For me it seems a bit fast sometimes and kinda jumpy? (If that's even a word XD ) However, I do like the idea of why you're doing that. Keep up the good work author!

Firstly, I just wanted to say: The author's writing style has a mysterious quality to it. Even though there are many grammar/clarity issues, the writing style is nevertheless a piece of art and very attractive. I unknowingly read more and more. But there are some parts that you should fix. For example, in the synopsis: Instead of writing "... in the crime of misleading the authorities, attempt to murder the Princess and the murder of the almighty emperor..." you could write "... in the crimes of misleading the authorities, attempted murder of the Princess, and killing of the almighty emperor..." Also, maybe you could split up the larger paragraphs? The large chunks of text can be difficult to read. The plot is so complex, and I'm loving every bit about it. No complaints there. The characters are a bit cliche, but cliches wouldn't be cliches if we didn't secretly enjoy them, right? Even though they don't exactly feel original, the characters are brought to life by the author's spectacular narrations. Emotions are very clearly expressed, an occurrence that I don't see much of these days. I applaud you once again. If there is one problem I have with the narration, its the constantly changing point of views. Maybe you should try learning how to connect scenes better so that everything flows more smoothly? Also, you should introduce new characters slowly and before they speak. In ch 7, the Eva and Sarah were introduced only when they spoke something relevant to the plot. It was as if they didn't exist previously. The story also needs some better world building. Since the story is set in an a medival themed (?) fantasy world, you should explain the aristocratic tiers more and the matters of the court. For example, what is the mc's family rank? I thought she was a princess, the only princess of the empire? And if her rank is high enough to be the fiance of the next emperor, how is it that some nobles can just carelessly mock her? I know for sure that in many medieval settings, mocking the empress/princess leads to execution. As a princess and the future queen, how is it that no one is guarding her when she was mugged? Yeah, so these questions should be answered. But overall, the book is pretty nice. Good luck author!

I am so glad to have found this novel. I don't know whether it is only me but sometimes when I read a novel I wish I could go in the story and strangle the bitchy antagonist! And then everyone lives happily ever after 😂👌.

Interesting story about a princess trying to fix the crimes committed against her by using the superior knowledge from her previous life. The overall drama and main plot are really well thought and the world-building is also pretty nice. The development that happens at the beginning of the story feels a little bit like it was played just for the shock value, but considering how it dealt with I guess it's not really that big of a problem. The cast of characters is fine. Sometimes they fall into the usual tropes of the loving-brother, the jealous-princess, the handsome-prince... But the author manages to give it enough of a spin to make them feel less of a cliche and more like actual people. Recommend reading the first four chapters to get a good grasp of the novel and deciding if it's your thing.

This story has a very interesting premise, I'm very curious to find out how the protagonist is going to turn things around after her rebirth. I'm also curious about Evan and his role in the princess' downfall. I absolutely don't trust Lilly. But the protagonist seems like a very strong character with the ability to handle the challenges coming her way. All in all I'm very interested from the chapters I've read.

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Very interesting plot, I have seen many animes and read much manga with a similar story, and I found it very interesting to read a novel such as this. Definitely added to my library.

Interesting plot of rebirth. The pace and development until now is good😊 the beginning is also well done with the mystery surrounding MC's execution. It was heartbreaking to know how she suffered in last life 😣 There are a few grammar issues like punctuations but they can be easily fixed by proof reading. I suggest author to use Grammarly tool. It's good for for editing and correcting basic mistakes. Good work author! Keep it up.👍

The story is very entertaining. The characters are created in modest and energetic way. The author is showcasing her passion in writing this story. It is really exciting to read the story it is very demanding.

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Hey hey hey, holy ****! I have a weak heart for the trope "hated by all but is actually good". At first, I thought that I won't fall into this type of stories because it's almost also the kind of ones that I write lol, ironically, but I did. The development is good. I love how we get to see from the main character and male lead's point of views; for it adds a lot to the character depth. I'm actually still in the middle of reading this, but I have to write this now. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds. :)

Stories of rebirth are fun to read. The start itself is very interesting and you wish to read more. ML and FL love each other but have never confessed leading to the tragedy. Keep it up

I just began reading this book and so far it’s really good. I’m looking forward to how the story and the characters develop. I don’t have anything bad to say. Good job!

Man..... This story is sinfully addictive.... Can't have a fay without reading it and I'm in love with Prince Evan..... Thank you author for extra chapter... Hope you write more and more chapters and mass release. From: In love with Reborn princess

It's such an interesting plot ....I love it ..the way author descriptions and the characters of the characters in the story....But I really want to know this Lily girl...how did both ml and fl got linked with her ?

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Reborn plot is amazing... I like the way the writer presented the whole scenerio of the princess and prince. The synopsis grabbed my interest. Waiting for the next plots and updates.. With lots of interest your novel fan.. 🤩

Wow.... The story is so interesting. I read all of the chapters at one go. I want to read more. Please author. And plz add more seens to Felix. I like him. Thank you

I checked the contest and saw this book. Yes, this book surely has the talent to get top. Hope reborn princess wins the contest. I'm counting upon you aeinshia. Hope you capture many hearts just like you took mine

I found this novel while scanning for a good book to read. The story is interesting. I have to say it is better while reading the chapters. I would totally recommend this novel to read.