How about this?

I can continue this, or rewrite because i dont think the character seem right he doesn't have any emotion in him and no desire also i could of done more character building and showing him with other people also takes me off writing about him.

Or I can write another fairy tail type fan-fic but with a shinobi system.

I don't mind which one you pick cough cough rewrite or the shiniobi cough cough

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