Reviews of Reborn In The Walking Dead
Reborn In The Walking Dead
Floridaboytonio
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The mc tells an oc (who I believe is a love interest) about the fact that he is a reincarnated being with a system, and special powers. enough said
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you said you wanted a good fic but you broke it from chapter 4 with telling her he reincarnated which doesn't make much sense to me even if you trust someone it doesn't make sense to tell them that I hoped you would change it see in all the bad review it got I don't see a point in telling a person you got a system and you RE it just break the flow in the fic
i d'ont know if the author will delet what i'm going to express here... i got an honest view here... its a trash one... the mc adopt the girl for no reason and tells the girl he is from another world and he got a system. the mc is trash in general... you will understand what i mean if you read the first 4 chapters.
Overall Rating: Subpar at best. WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors. 4/5 SD: Too lame! as author-san follows the cannon too much which greatly decrease the story & MC progression. 1/5 CD: Author/MC breaks the most important unwritten rule of all reincarnators/transmigrators "Kiss & Tell". 1/5 US: Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. 3/5 WB: The storys setup is well thought as the wishes is not the OP & it kinda still follows the rule of the world 'excluding' system. 4/5 Could've been a great FF of TWD if author-san didn't follow the route of kiss & tell as it shows lack of understanding pertaining to reincarnation/transmigration which created tons of plot holes. I highly recommend reading several isekai's novel to further improve your creative writing and understanding of the said subject.
Gave it 3 stars due to not reading it what put me off 1 mc being some sort of super fighter 2 3 wishes 3 have a logical reason for who they partner with even if harem have the characters reasons they are open to it logical 4 that was it I'd be happy to read a fan fic of walking dead with their own shift in story due to future knowledge etc Not bothered by harem as long as it fits description of said characters I'd be fine if mc had some perk for example they could be granted knowledge/ abilities of 1 fictional character within limits example (knowledge and or abilities of 1 of following John wick Alejandro gillick Katness everdeen Maximus Decimus Meridius: The punisher) Those are examples, all highly capable in certain fields mainly killing or fighting but they still have limits and are not practically universally talented for example batman That for me would make a good fan fic
Me agrada mucho el diseño del personaje y como poco a poco va creciendo mediante las situaciones por que es algo diferente ver la serie que vivirla ( Me agrada que solo tenga solo tres mujeres) por que luego hay harem de 20 personas y pues no le da la importancia a cada una, pero tuviste la buena idea de solo tres 👌🥺
Of course, I'm a little upset that the MC decided to reveal all of his secrets to another person. But in general, the fanfic itself turns out to be quite good. And if you, the author, limit the number of MCs enlightened in the secrets of only one girl (from the 4th chapter), then I will give you 4+ in advance. Come on bro, light it up properly.
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