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Reviews of Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

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ForgottenLife
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Hello! Author here. I am a new writer who is writing a original novel. I have read various and thought of writing a fan-fiction to improve my writing skills. NOW FOR THE FAN-FIC There will be no harem, sorry to disappoint harem lovers. Though there can be two wives depending on reader's demand. A poll will be conducted to decide that. I am writing a action novel with mix elements of fantasy and adventure. I have zero experience in writing romance and don't expect me to pull out cheesy romance out of nowhere, though I am currently reading some romance novels to learn, but that will not be the focus for this novel. As unnecessary romance and harem may f**k up the story and drastically reduce the quality of reading experiences. Thank you and stay tuned with me and also don't forget to check out my original Novel based on Indian Mythology with many legendary beings and powers.

Luffynaruto
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iLustForSleep
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Are you interested in joining the Loli Sect?. . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. .. . . .. .. . . . . . . . ..

AS9
AS9Lv4AS9

Garbage.... Author tried to be over-smart but ****ed it up instead.... The kid can somehow use and even evolve Sharingan without activating his Chakra network.. SURE..... He won't train taijutsu because he will be injured even though we've already seen kids like Kakashi and Itachi do it at around the same time.. SURE.... He won't even fucking train Chakra control because apparently that's dangerous as well even though we've seen kids use ninjutsu when they were like four... SURE.....

Baneofthedragon
BaneofthedragonLv4Baneofthedragon

Your knowledge of narutoverse is too shallow. Although i encourage ans admire authors taken on their own ideas into a fanfic, i really hate it when they get their facts wrong. First of all the timeline, that can be overlooked because this is a AU. But giving chakra colors, then mc activating his sharingan on the day he was born, then saying after three years he hasn't unlocked his chakra points, dude you can't activate a sharingan without unlocking your chakra. Then theres the whole bullshit about the mc saying he can't train taijutsu till age 7, dude madara killed his first ***** ninja at the age of 4or5 yrs old and was stronger than most adults at age 10 or something, and here we have a mc with perfect sharingan, one tail level chakra at birth with a regenaration ability as strong if not stronger than hashirama himself and he is afraid of training too much*scoffs* as much as i hate insulting, i hate it more when information is wrong, so i advice you author to reread your facts and correct your mistakes.

Luke_Kelly
Luke_KellyLv1Luke_Kelly

Why have you made him so weak when he has at his disposal. he doesnr start working out till he is 7 because its bad for your body yet kakashi can become a chunin at 6

mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5mutekishifu

it was a 5 star, but the author put a lot of OC OP out of his ass. (serious brother, a guy just appeared at the level of the wise level of the 6 paths) I bet that before naturo turns 12, the black goku will appear

lolsolow
lolsolowLv4lolsolow

Mc is a hypocrite, I hate that. He acts as if he knows EVERYTHING. Only he is smart, everyone else worthless dumb bitchs and MC decides who lives and who doesn't. He is dumb, really dumb. Unfortunately not in a funny way :( Grammar is really meh. Lots of word issues such as 'their and there' and sentences are placed weirdly(sometimes hard to understand).

3RR0R_404
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Hmmm can't really write a review since I'm bad at describing things but I'll try. Well let's see, grammar, its ok, I don't have any problems with it. Update, well its stable so that's good. Story development, I don't know since I can't think of anything to say to this. Characters, they're not emotionless puppets so that's good. World background, the author I guess knows it so its good

PatrickS
PatrickSLv3PatrickS

Great fanfic, until 'Sin Seal' makes it appearance. you know what makes it worse?? with the negative effect of sin seal, MC chooses to learn kekkei Genkai which makes him out of gas after using it once or twice. instead honing skills that he already had, like ninjutsu with small chakra usage, genjutsu, or taijutsu. I don't know the reason behind the need to learn kekkei Genkai while he has that 'sickness'. I guess because readers critics the choice the Author made to nerf MC hard. He wants to make MC look badass by learning kekkei Genkai despite having a weakness. but instead looks badass, it makes me question MC's brain. *sorry for my bad English.

Dr_Absent_Minded
Dr_Absent_MindedLv6Dr_Absent_Minded

sorry to burst your bubble bro it does exist but i still gave you a 4star review without even reading it because maybe you will take it as an inspiration and make a better one than the one below https://***.fanfiction.net/s/9172570/1/Legacy

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4DearCompanion

Thanks for letting us know but I'll leave, there's no point in becoming OP but he's afraid to get more girls, he would just kill everyone until the world is empty and so that's it, the story ends LOL

Anas_Nazim
Anas_NazimLv3Anas_Nazim

Great story. I loved reading it. Hey you can ignore it but can you make a killing intent based jutsu. I mean he has chakra equal to tailed beast. And please don't make him aquare renagun early. Make it like when Madara finds out about he hides and trains the MC.

Thorq
ThorqLv2Thorq

I like story's beginning, but MC become more retarded with each chapter and I wasn't able read more then 40 chapters.

wallwin
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RyuSenju
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please never drop this naruto novel I really like it.Its a good novel but please don't add any world travel in this fanfiction because their is already to much world travel one.

Acnologiia
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Geraint124x
Geraint124xLv4Geraint124x

Oh... Interesting. Don't click this review, you will regret it... KILLA QUEEN DAISAN NO BAKUDAN, BITES ZA DUSTO!!! 💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥

Shem_Sama
Shem_SamaLv1Shem_Sama

Damn u mess your own plot very badly author san at first you want to make him op and now you want to nerf him?? Though you messed up I gotta say it's been a fine ride reading your story please keep up the goodwork

MetalShadowF
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