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reborn in MHA with fire and ice pheonix powers
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reborn in MHA with fire and ice pheonix powers

VEGETA_15505

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Read reborn in MHA with fire and ice pheonix powers fanfiction written by the author VEGETA_15505 on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, adventure, transmigration, op. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved

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a boy reincarnates in MHA world with 9 wishes

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BIGO_NIGO
BIGO_NIGOLv3BIGO_NIGO

its a good concept however the grammar is very lacking so I recommend using somthing like grammarly, also the way you narrate is kind of weird. You use first person (mc point of view) and third person (narrators point of view). I recommend you use more first person than third because that makes the reader feel more involved with the story. And when you write in third person dont write like you are the one who is speaking but a narrator who is in the universe and does not know about the fourth wall. For example dont say "the mc sat down" say "Lucas sat down"

Sakkaku_no_mori
Sakkaku_no_moriLv3Sakkaku_no_mori

Hohoho... Nice nice nice... Have the power of fire, ice and wind pheonix is op of course. .. But the romance is satisfying where he and momo are future husband and wife. .. Maybe momo take a liking toward nejire and pestering the mc to take nejire as future 2nd wife to but no less.. .

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