Reviews of Reborn In MHA With A Devil Fruit Power

I will be blunt: this story is utter trash. The grammar and vocabulary is terrible, and the format is closer to a screenplay than a novel. The plot is essentially a canon rehash. The main character attempts to be edgy but only comes across as a spineless loser without the will to act on his thoughts. Having a DF power is an interesting idea, but rather than making an original DF or using an existing DF in new and creative ways, he copies Luffy's powerset without importing over Luffy's personality or any of the work Luffy had to put in to earn those skills. Basically, the author took 2 settings and mixed them up in such a sloppy and unimaginative manner that he ended up with something far less than the sum of its parts.

It's bad. Grammar wasn't good, the characters are poorly written and extremely two-dimensional. The idea is pretty good but the execution is poor, mc just copies Luffy without putting in any effort there wasn't a single line about him training he just 'mastered' 2nd and 3rd gear. I added +1 star to every category for the 'no harem' tag lol.

I am totally giving this book 5 stars because of its amazing qaulity and potential and not because I want exp but even if I am tis be happy for the free 5 stars

The story is interesting but the writing quality is not good. The visuality of characters would be non-existent. But the story is interesting nonetheless.

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I like the idea, but the execution is so bad. The characters might as well be cardboard cut outs, and bad ones at that. None of them have any personality, and the MC that we’re supposed to like is even worse. He has no redeeming qualities that would make someone like or root for him really. Don’t waste your time.

the idea of the story is good but you have to change the dialogues of the characters it feels like you copy and paste it you have to change it

Very good, I really enjoyed the fanfic, I'm looking forward to more, I don't understand people's rights complaining about the grammar for me it's great but it doesn't take much notice since I'm just a person with a different opinion, when he used GEAR FOURTH in nomu I'll talk as a fan of the accompanying one piece I got goosebumps remembering the doflamingo's bow when luffy used it for the first time in a real fight, it was really cool it passed the same feeling in the doflamingo's fight I was very excited but the fourth gear wasn't as hard as it should have last this is the only part i was sad about well i hope you use fourth snakeman and tankman gear and maybe new moves that luffy could have invented, well it would be hard since luffy is a genius at turning his fruit into a hitting business face to face with kaidou, well look forward to more releases.

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