Reviews of REBORN IN MARVEL WITH BAN POWER

Just read the synopsis and wow it was heavily tilted to one piece powers and from just that can't really make out if I want to read this or not.

Why don’t you just say being reborn with immortality because that’s the only power ban have. The rest are pure skill, learn from years of fighting.

Not even going to read but the fact you have the sole power in the title is just bans but you then add like 12 more in the synopsis is just disappointing

Like the fact the story is made around the mutants. normally marvel fanfics start out next to spiderman and go further there. MC has a unique personality thats quite narcissistic and show quite a temper. It is a shame that there are things about his powers, like using the wrong ability name or the fact where he cant use all his powers from gomu gomu no mi when he has bans powers. Ok i get that the writer doesn’t want to make the mc too op but he shouldve thought about that before giving him 5 powers (bans power, 3 fruits and haki). I liked the fact that he only had jean as gf but now that he is thinking of having multiple girls makes the story less fun to read. almost all fanfics are harem why not stay with 1 girl for once. And lastly the sentences are sometimes hard to understand as he writes with broken english. I get that u make some mistakes ,but this is rly hard to read if ur not first language isn’t english like me.

This is so cringey. If you want to read a story about a guy who wants to be a hero and stop crime for no reason and say the cringiest thing then this is the novel for you. The conversations are so unhuman like and crigney. Everything he does as a hero is cringe. to sum this boom up in one word”cringe”

Wow, just wow. I didn't think it could get this bad. Sorry if I offended you author but this is pure garbage. I am not going to create a more detailed review as I don't find the obligation, I didn't even read past the 5th paragraph so I find no need. And if any of you say 'You didn't even read past the first chapter then how can you review it properly?' This is my message to you: Read it yourself (Because anyone who has read it will not disagree with me).

Most of the powers don't do what they are suppost to do and he gave the mc regeneration not regenerative immortality Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash

This is not quite right. Ban's power steal was always temporary, while it didn't mean that he couldn't get stronger it never lasted that long. Also, why mess up Jean? Jean's romantic life is as messed up or more so than most of the other marvel ladies. Why did you have to go and mess her up some more?

i can't really understand why you don't give mc the true powers of ban like immortality but if you gave him ridiculous powers like the gummy fruit, if you only kept ban powers it would have been great, but you screwed up since the start.

I can't understand why author nerfed ban power of immortality and steal power.One the reason why authors like this stay mediocre. ///////////////

Yeah i am not going to lie this is pretty shit. The MC is cringe worthy as ****, i mean he goes around saying “I am Revolt.” Like that is his catchphrase. Eurgh, the devil fruits he chose are pretty odd as well, but ah well that isn’t my choice it is up to the author. Idk man, your dialogue is really awkward and doesnt make much sense. I wouldnt recommend it but each to their own.

I just dont like his hero name😐😐😐revolt wtf is that you could just name him nightwing that sounds cool greed cause yuknow his the sin of greed...and the more i read it the it,the more it gets boring😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶

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the author is super lazy and gives no explanation for anything. as for his updates I can't comment because I am not going to stay to find out.my advice is to not waste your time with this one.

So I’m not sure why this is getting so manny high reviews. I have it a good try but it is truly almost unreadable. Now why this bothers me so much is because it’s super easy to use grammarly or any other word processor that will fix most of the problems the author is having but he is clearly not utilizing any. The story is also very jarring in its flow. I hope you takes this as constructive criticism and not hate and improve your story. I would love to come back and read it at that point.

Don't waste your time. The powers don't even do what they're meant to. he ruined Ban's powers. Mc's hero name sucks. He doesn't even do much heroing anyways instead always giving false hope to girls. females gawk at him and men glare at him in the street, and can I just say he's meant to be 14! The storyline isn't consistent and can I just say who would let a 5 year old live alone. And he MC isn't even meant to be a genius but somehow made an AI. He keeps on screaming 'I am Revolt!' at everyone. And don't even get me started at the update schedule. I have many more complains but am gonna stop here because I have better things to go read now.

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