First I have to say, it is a pity, a real pity that it fell, although it does not have much intrigue since it is more or less evident the path that the MC will follow, which would be considered a somewhat cliché story, it is still a good story ... or rather a good start to the story and a great idea for a story, it would have been nice to see how the fic would develop, this goes more to the author than to the readers, Author- san XD, please come back with the story, he continues, is potentially very good fic.