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The story is very bad, and the worst of it is the protagonist himself, he acts totally the opposite of the description that the author gives about the character. He acts like a retard, as well as a coward. The story and the characters have zero development, the oc itself spoils the whole plot, the author even manages to spoil existing characters from the original work!
Goddess: hello fbi I would like to report a old dude in a child's body targeting a little girl FBI: we are on it! (a few days later at hyoudo house) FBI: FBI OPEN UP!!
Shit the worst novel ever **** author how old are you 6 wenn i read this **** i Keept thinkink wtf how cant somebody write this **** and how com the raiting is 4.1 bah dick **** 🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
As always this book has been the best books I have read and I want to thank the author personally for such a wonderful book. I appreciate you very much.
This is probably the best comedy fanfiction I have ever read and it's also got some good lemon scenes.😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥❤❤❤❤❤💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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I don't know why there's a lot of haters. they should just appreciate the novel as is, don't just hate on it And the novel is pretty good
This book is overall very good. I don't get bored reading this book at all. This book is in fact one of the best if not the best fan fiction book I have ever read. That's a thumbs up to the writer
Author, if you read my comment, I just wanted to say: how it would be if I wrote another story of (shinmai no testament), from what I see you know how to handle humor, just a comment from me, eg. PDTA: GOOD HISTORY, THE BEST OF ALL THE XDX I HAVE READ.
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This story is just amazing. Author puts so much work into his work. I can see his/her efforts. Also the characters are a fresh breath in the DXD fan-fiction scene at least for me.
The story is very interesting till now and the new character flavor makes this even more interesting than the original story. Also the characters have a new kind of depth to him than in the Original. Thanks for the hard work author 🙏
The newest developments in the story are exciting. It goes in a direction I haven’t thought of so far. Thanks for this amazing piece of Art Author 🙏
Great story hope u don't drop. Why do I need to write a 140 letter long review to comment mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkkkmmmmmm
I love it DXD is one of my favorite anime's and of all the fanfics I'd say this one is worth the read If your thinking about a good fanfic with great development I highly reccomend!!!
sigh...... it has high rating so I expecting so much about this story.... All ok and very interesting and then.... BAMM!!! -gender bender-.... just.... sigh..... hhaaaahh~~ If Issei is a pain in the ass, then just reincarnated as Issei, you don't like the name then change the name... with that Issei's problem is fixed and you will be Hyoudou couple biologic son, not just their adoptive son...
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I just LOVE it. But you could improve your grammer a little, and you know, you could add a little more detail in the lemon scenes*ahem**ahem* Just saying. And also, I can't believe that there is a fellow Indian that is a good writer like this, but please improve your grammer, please...