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it looks promising, so before the author(probably)f*uck-up some things i would like to give him a few tips(merely suggesting, don't take offence). 1: please develop their feelings properly. Don't simply make a timeskip and say that they have fallen in love in the middle as many other novels whose mc have a romantic interest during childhood . 2:Don't use scythes. They may look cool, but they're ridiculously impractical(and somewhat overused) since he will have to get the scythe past his enemy and then pull inward to cut something. 3: supposing, his previous experience as an assassin will affect his fighting style I would like to suggest twin daggers. Pros: fast, dual purpose(simultaneous attack, defend with one and attack with another), simple(no need for complicated movesets like sword styles). Cons: normally requires close range( thought i think that he can can compensate that with Shadow manipulation and throw them like Gilgamesh).
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A good read. The mc is a guy looking to enjoy his life in a new world, and wants to go around visiting different places. I like the powers you've given him. Especially the magic where he can create anything he wants. The reincarnated mc, usualy blends in the world immediately and adapt to their culture of only cultivating or they aim for the girls when just a few months ago they were earthlings who lived in a modern world. If I were to reincarnate there I'd get petty bored at some point with nothing but cultivation and women. Yami using his power and ideitic memory to create mangas and anime, his short hairstyle which is frowned upon there and his modern clothes shows that, at the end of the day, he still came from earth. The romance is awesome. I love how you take your time building the harem. I'm at chapter 60 something and Chu Qingyi is still the only woman in his eyes despite the fact that one of the most beautiful women of that universe, if not the most beautiful tried to seduce him since he was young. The world building is good compared to other fanfic who only follow canon. There is a mystery like where does Merum come from and why did his reincarnation cause the universe to shake? (most pple think that it was unnecessary but if it really was, then the author wouldn't have write it that way). Yoru's reincarnation and her past (I'm sure she's the heavenly tiger who died during the war. But I look forward to know how she was like in the past). Xiao Yan and his flame elf or whatever as well as the other 5 disciple who are in a special dimension in each of the seeds. All in all, I really enjoyed binge reading it and it's a really good book for a first novel in my opinion. The only negative point would be the irregular updates. I've seen one or two comments saying that the story is boring and I got to say that the wait between updates indeed kills my interest. It's a good story to binge read but I don't like the wait in between (I know that the author is busy and has his own life to live. This is a free novel so he has no obligation whatsoever to update on a daily basis, but I just had to say it for the review) So I'm gonna keep this fanfic in my library and come back to it in a few months when you reach 200 chapters or something like that (canon hasn't even started yet so I presume that the ff will have way more than 200 chap) I recommend to all atg lovers.
First sorry about my bad english About the review It a fake harem story bait people with harem tag and greet you with OC character it not just the mc but also his love interest too, now it make me wonder why bother with ATG fiction if you gonna use all OC for main character/love interest with OG mc i get it but love interest too? i mean christ this is ATG we talking about there so many girl in the story why OG? I don't know i'm sure it not just me that read ATG fic because i like the girl in the story but i hate how mar gravity treat them and now look at qingyue suffer because mc flat out reject her ( harem yo ) the story also full of filler it going nowhere i believe it not even reach the canon point yet
Each person has his or her own tastes, I guess. I saw that many readers like this story, and that's fine, but for me, this is one of the worst ATG fanfics I've ever read. The OC(Chu Qingyi) is too flat as a character. There is too much sugar, sometimes it feels like filler and there are long chapters of this. The MC acts in a very contradictory way. The humor is terrible, really, very bad, if you are not funny don't try or it ends badly. Totally a waste of time This is just my opinion, that I don't like it doesn't make it bad, I saw that there are many who do like the story, but I simply can't read this.
Of all of fan-fictions that i've read on this platform so far, i do have to say this one definitely achieves no. 1 on my list. The characters are properly fleshed out and have their own personality that gives them a really nice vibe and makes the whole story very enjoyable. The interactions between the characters are believable and feel... how do i say this? Natural? The relationships and feelings between the characters aren't forced but rather reasonable. TL:DR; I'm not good with words but: By all means, give this a read. It is very good.
Well... What to say, like all the solo leveling theme fanfics the stupid MC waste his time making his shadows stronger and not him, add that to the fact that he can only increase his cultivation with the shadow absortion and stupidity level of the MC increase over 9000! If you go to tags you can see a 'harem' tag there, do you see it? Well, stop wasting your time because is f*king bait. Bunch of chapters filled with cheap korean drama, the author make Xia Qingyue obsessed with the MC just to the MC trown she to the trash, then the author come with cheap excuses that would make sense if they were real siblings and the MC didn't was a reincarnated person, but guess what Sherlock, he's indeed retarded reincarnator. As the story goes on you can see something... Almost all the people the MC meet are OC, which make me wonder why the f*ck you do fanfic if you wouldn't show any of the OG characters, the only thing that makes me remember this is ATG are the Cultivation Stages 'cause neither the way he """cultivate""", the people he meet or the sites he visit make me think, hey, that's ATG.
well its good and all the only bad thing about this is the fight scenes, everyone have read the sypnosis and he was assasin in his last life so i expect that was the way he will fight, yes at the beginning but after he leaves the xia manor he just became another brute berserker who only craves for battle and juat go on straight to attack the enemy and he already forgot how to plan an attack like in the beginning, the assasin part is tottaly useless
