Reborn in a Magic World as an Heir to a Marquisate

This is my first book so I am very inexperienced. I hope I didn't make too many mistakes, and if I did, I would love to receive critique. I am also sorry if you hoped this was a good novel from the get-go but i plan to improve over time. The title had to be dramatic because I couldn't use the "Reborn in a Magic World" as a title because of some rules. Th updates will be irregular, I don't think i can write a chapter a day, but ill do my best.