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I think the wish of letting his family live is stupid, why? It's cause, he might give it to people who would want to die in peace, the wish just makes people sad, Immortality or even a long life can make people suicidal. Dumb wish & how would the main character know whether the person (family member) is loyal to uzushiogakure or not? The person who gets the wolverine regeneration factor might as well be another Danzo. The wish should've been one that makes him be able to give the people he wants a long life, but what he got is messed up & stupid. And based on this idiocy, I don't think this story is worth it because the Author might as well keep doing dumb stuff and mess up this already unintelligent fanfic. [Not recommended for intelligent individuals]
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Yeah, the wishes man... he has everything from the get-go. All he needed was the immortality thing and even that would be too much since there is nothing left just to get stronger. He has a body that could have any energy, he has huge amounts of it, he has every information about anything, he has a solar system filled with materials and the op eyes. Now, what's the point of reading this? He should already be OP from birth and the story should end in 10 chapters. This is just a wish fullfillment story, some wet dream of the author.
In general, it is better to quit this work, it is full of water and nonsense about romance when you need to dose it and not make a whole plot out of it, you should actually not sit and wait for a miracle, but start space expansion, or at least until the 21st century, technologists should finish and not sit and tell everyone in the world that you are getting married knowing that you can be eaten like candy at any time
good start .... this has great potential .... if you want strong enemies you could use the movies and fillers enemies as most other demons were sealed and you could make mc seal or kill them .... also the threat level during that era was great even for the mc .... seals have great possibilities like space expansion , mind protection , training , artifacts , communication , etc ... you could even make seals that restricts bloodlines , the reaction of the uchiha and hyuga if it is done would be precious
Genial idea, buena historia, este es un consejo dado por un lector al azar,; como sabrΓ‘s, al igual que el clan uzumaki, el clan Uchiha, el clan kaguya, etc, hubo decenas de clanes que se extingieron antes y despuΓ©s de las guerras ninja, si quieres colocar enemigos fuertes para tu MC op , puedes crear tu propio clan con una lΓnea de sangre fuerte, o copiar otros clanes de otras series, ej. El clan gremori, clan baal, clan de los demonios carmesΓ XD, etc, bueno este es todo mi consejo, ciao.
The story is a mess and I tell you this as an author of this story. My first try writing , it gave me a slight idea of what writing really feels , and we all have to admit , our first works always suck , but practice makes perfect. π This project is abandoned , and I will probably never return to it since it is too much of a mess to get into.
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