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BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv4BobboLobbo

I think the wish of letting his family live is stupid, why? It's cause, he might give it to people who would want to die in peace, the wish just makes people sad, Immortality or even a long life can make people suicidal. Dumb wish & how would the main character know whether the person (family member) is loyal to uzushiogakure or not? The person who gets the wolverine regeneration factor might as well be another Danzo. The wish should've been one that makes him be able to give the people he wants a long life, but what he got is messed up & stupid. And based on this idiocy, I don't think this story is worth it because the Author might as well keep doing dumb stuff and mess up this already unintelligent fanfic. [Not recommended for intelligent individuals]

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DaoisttG3KuY
DaoisttG3KuYLv1DaoisttG3KuY

bit.ly/3LyRF1N πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

EdanKote
EdanKoteLv5EdanKote

too many wishes. I have read only one chapter and I will not go further. I think it will be quickly abandoned by the author. ..........................

Reimoss
ReimossLv13Reimoss

Yeah, the wishes man... he has everything from the get-go. All he needed was the immortality thing and even that would be too much since there is nothing left just to get stronger. He has a body that could have any energy, he has huge amounts of it, he has every information about anything, he has a solar system filled with materials and the op eyes. Now, what's the point of reading this? He should already be OP from birth and the story should end in 10 chapters. This is just a wish fullfillment story, some wet dream of the author.

Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1Len_Stoff

In general, it is better to quit this work, it is full of water and nonsense about romance when you need to dose it and not make a whole plot out of it, you should actually not sit and wait for a miracle, but start space expansion, or at least until the 21st century, technologists should finish and not sit and tell everyone in the world that you are getting married knowing that you can be eaten like candy at any time

TacetIrae
TacetIraeAuthorTacetIrae

As one of the shameless authors i give rating to myself. If you have any questions , you can ask them here. If you have any idead about the story you can drop comment here as well.

FrEeZe
FrEeZeLv4FrEeZe

Nothing special [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Harie_Dharan
Harie_DharanLv4Harie_Dharan

good start .... this has great potential .... if you want strong enemies you could use the movies and fillers enemies as most other demons were sealed and you could make mc seal or kill them .... also the threat level during that era was great even for the mc .... seals have great possibilities like space expansion , mind protection , training , artifacts , communication , etc ... you could even make seals that restricts bloodlines , the reaction of the uchiha and hyuga if it is done would be precious

Raven_Soul
Raven_SoulLv3Raven_Soul

Reveal spoiler

Braian_Rodriguez
Braian_RodriguezLv1Braian_Rodriguez

Genial idea, buena historia, este es un consejo dado por un lector al azar,; como sabrΓ‘s, al igual que el clan uzumaki, el clan Uchiha, el clan kaguya, etc, hubo decenas de clanes que se extingieron antes y despuΓ©s de las guerras ninja, si quieres colocar enemigos fuertes para tu MC op , puedes crear tu propio clan con una lΓ­nea de sangre fuerte, o copiar otros clanes de otras series, ej. El clan gremori, clan baal, clan de los demonios carmesΓ­ XD, etc, bueno este es todo mi consejo, ciao.

Majeh7
Majeh7Lv5Majeh7

good story so far keep up the great work...................................................................................................................

JOKER_JAY
JOKER_JAYLv4JOKER_JAY

this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.

WetAppleDream
WetAppleDreamLv13WetAppleDream

thats it for now.. i will change later when there are more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]dont drop pls..

Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

TacetIrae
TacetIraeAuthorTacetIrae

The story is a mess and I tell you this as an author of this story. My first try writing , it gave me a slight idea of what writing really feels , and we all have to admit , our first works always suck , but practice makes perfect. 😁 This project is abandoned , and I will probably never return to it since it is too much of a mess to get into.

Soul_Parade
Soul_ParadeLv2Soul_Parade

it's hilarious. one of the most terrible story here. even though this is a fanfic naruto story, the author completely destroys the story from the start. So sorry for my review.

XmL
XmLLv10XmL

the only interesting thing about this fanfiction premise was the uzumaki clan, something undeveloped. where the chains are and working with the famous seals of the Uzumaki clan. I still don't understand why introduce magic into naruto's world, it takes all the charm out of the work.

GodlyRuler
GodlyRulerLv4GodlyRuler

Reveal spoiler

Lucas_Iceberg2005
Lucas_Iceberg2005Lv4Lucas_Iceberg2005

This has a lot of potential and is a really good fanfic so plsssss don’t drop it.πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ˜”πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

00Yami00
00Yami00Lv1000Yami00

It's ok. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................