Skull_King_Brook
I find it acceptable so far, but the stability is pretty bad, 1 month for your letter count per chapter and a lot of time and not worth monitoring, I'll wait a bit to see how it will unfold and if you will improve stability or not. In relation to the story, I think it would be more feasible for MC to follow thatch to find yami yami in mi, so he wouldn't need to steal, or simply say openly that you are looking for yami yami in mi for your crew, because they are all brothers, I don't think thatch would refuse to give you the fruit.