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Good development, with good potential.a novel with some fresh and innovative ideas.The question is, is the protagonist still a villain or is he now a hero?I would prefer him to take the villain's path, but not get lost in it and become a psychopath.
The writing quality is decent it can use bit of cleaning up, but is still very clear.The story has a fast development but it's clear enough you don't get lost.The mc is generic lone wolf like most cultivation novels.As for the world there is lot to be filled in, but the description is god enough that you can understand what is going on.Overall a decent book just need more flare.
The story is awesome !! The writing quality is great too. 👍😀
This novel is a breath of fresh air for me from always reading generic romances. I like the story's pacing and the introductory chapter is already engaging enough to get me so reeled. Really appreciate this story, and I hope to read more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
wow nice book good job from author , I'm waiting for more chapters♥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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I won't lie here. Only read up to chapter three and I would point out that it is a great start in terms of storyline but the writing style seems inhuman - almost like AI. I would like to give the author the benefit of the doubt and assume that he wrote it himself before asking AI to rewrite with perfect grammar or else... All that aside, very good start. A good storyline I see here. Give it a try. If you don't find slightly inhuman perfection jarring like I do then this would be a good fit for you. I also like the fact that MC is an ordinary guy before transmigrated, a breath of fresh air to see an old man mc
AI has been used to write this story. While I wouldn’t have much of an issue if the AI was used infrequently, this story has 100% used AI all throughout. I can’t even go past a single chapter without losing my will to read. If you enjoy long and dreary writing then go for it.. 👌🏼 The only thing I can really say is that since it is AI written, the quality of the writing is undoubtedly good. ANOTHER point is that the way it is mainly 3rd person, yet when it blends into 1st person at times, it comes across as very unnatural. This is just my opinion, and this read isn’t for me. Please check it out for yourself before you take my word to the T.
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in simple terms, great book.the character progression keeps on guessing and world building is just amazing.Nice one author
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