2 Being Rewritten

I fucked up the intro so I'll be rewritting this part of the Four Wishes in addition to writing the last of the series. This has always been written as a Standalone series, each book being the pinnacle of it's subject within the series, well except the Avatar one since I split that two ways between the Unpublished Last Airbender part and published Legend Of Korra parts.

As for those of you curious what I fucked up, it was the dates. And for me and my style of writing, something which is akin to a family trait due to being a family of record keepers, that's a big fuckup.

Basically Everytime I get to chapter 2, I forget the exact dates because I have no listings of said dates in the story at the start like I typically do. Plus even before this I wasn't Satisfied with the outcome.

Anywho, for the last of the Series it's gonna be a Marvel Story, I'm definitely using MCU, but am far from sold on solely just using the MCU as source material. I need your guys help in this regard because I wanna hear your guys input on what I should wish for in regards to Powers:

My shortlist is thus:

Blessed with the Body of Kratos: As in all his physical powers, not the stuff dependent on items he loots or steals.

A Green Lantern Power Ring capable of mimicking the abilities of the Phantom Ring without the Problems said PR has.

A Hybrid whose potentially Half-Kree, Half-Asgardian, Half-Celestial, Half-Eternal, Half-Dragon, or possibly has a Half from another Franchise such as being Half-Saiyan, Kryptonian, or whatever. Bear in mind those are just possibilities and nothing set in stone.

An Inhuman or Mutant whose Powers could be Fire Manipulation, Telekinesis, Darkness Manipulation, Destructive Energy Manipulation, Black Hole Manipulation, Materiokinesis, or possibly Dark Matter Manipulation.

Now I got one more Option before I hit up on the Future direction of THIS Story and I think you guys will like it:

A personal set of Rings Identical in Powers and Ability save one custom as to the Ten seen in Shang-Chi.

Now onto this stories future....

Having sat and watched Boba Fett extensively, let's get a look at being a Force-Sensitive Bounty Hunter....descended from Revan and a secret Ancestor I haven't fully decided on yet. And four guesses as to his Crew of five consists of, I'll name one because it's far too obvious: HK.

As for the remaining four three hints: One's the Star wars equivalent of Nymeria Sand, Two of them are sister's, and the last one to joins actress became an international Sex Symbol.

That's all I got for you guys right now, Got a Lotta work did so little free time, of course Rag has it worse,he's only just overcome a writer's block, faceplanted twice, lost all the strength in his arms from a run across those giant inflatables at the pools, and has half the strength in his grip after that, and has youth support starting up again only to have to write a good K in word count when he's dog tired and ends up only getting four hours of sleep.

Sometimes I'm grateful for not being nearly so swamped as my cousin.

Anyways, Bye for now and hopefully see you guy's way sooner than opposed to being way way later

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