Immortal_Simo
Hey author here is some of my ideas you could add you could make an avatar for mc to be reborn into and do something in the mortal world of course it will ony be part of his original body that he can control subconsciously this way you will give as another POV that could be really interesting and maybe later on reaincarnte somebody form earth and maybe make him meet your avatar he should also make some fun planete like sci-fi and more the idea you got is good but its hard to make a story that is long for it you could also do some universal wars but do that later on when you get a bigger fan base. Another idea you could do is to mc original universe concur it then make a zombie apocalypse from it or magical apocalypse but make the world go back to time when mc died originaly and take his place there and just try to make it fun for him like a game and please do multiple pov's so that the story is not boring. Sorry for my bad english
If anyone is hesitant to read this book because the author’s first language isn’t English, don’t be. Unlike many other novels with authors whose first language isn’t English, this one is actually readable. In other novels like that, you would normally struggle to understand the jumble of words that are randomly strewn together, but here, although there are mistakes, it is still easily readable and you don’t want to rip your eyes out reading it!
best book ever i dont even need to say anything only thing i wish is i had like 50000000000 chapters to read. i should leave my country and go live in a hut in the middle of nowhere for 5 years then come back home to internet and have chapters to read. i dont even care if people dont like this book i luv it.
Sorry, Simo just found out I never left a review. Anyway, This story is amazing in multiple ways and deserves all the praise it's getting but all novels have faults and the main one with this story is that the writer is a gremlin and pretty lazy but other than that it's amazing and definitely worth a read. If you enjoy creation types of stories you will love this novel and well I won't tell you more than that because I think you should just go ahead and read this novel right now. Ps: read at least 20~ chapters before deciding on whether or not it's worth reading.
I really love Reincarnation Books❤🥺 so when i met the author through a game and he said he wrote a book about someone being reincarnated as a Creator i was really eager to read it. After reading his book, i was totally immersed in it . I love the characters but the only thing that i was abit against was the harem at the early chapters and how the angel and the Creator had sex straight away without any thorough development in the relationship. I know they are meant to love him because he created them but it just feels rushed ya know? Even if someone created you there always should be a bond to develop like the relationship between you and your parents. Thats how i felt about Ysion and the gods. The rest was fine but i felt that there were also too many characters in the story that there werent much spotlight on some gods . I mean i do love the different perspective, it is quite an interesting idea and not many books have that kind of content but for someone who may not be able to read the book everyday since they may be busy so when they try and catch up on the book , they will have to look back on chapters on some characters that they may have forgotten about which is quite tedious. But overall LOVELY BOOK YA BIMO ❤ KEEP CREATING MORE YA TWERP AND DO THE OTHER BOOK TOO 🥺🥺🥺