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I love second chance stories. Usually it's the person who was wronged who gets reborn and a chance to right the wrongs they suffered and get justice or revenge. This story differs in that it was the villianess who gets the second chance. Liking the story so far. Both leads are likeable and pace of story is good. Looking forward to more!💄💋😗😘😙😚😍❤
The story is good. Even if it's somewhat different from my expectations, I still decided that it's even better in this way. I mean that I wanted to beat up the ML at first, but the author finally made me change my mind. I managed to curb such violent tendecies and move towards love and peace, lol. Give it a try. First chapters need some editing, but it's getting better with every chapter. The plot is worthy of reader's love and attention. There're some good twists here and there.
Dropping it after reading 35 chapters. I tried to read it further but no matter how hard I try I can't... the writing is alright but I don't like the MCs at all. The ml in the first life ignored the fl and fell in love with someone else (thus leading her to become a villain ) but in the next life when the fl tried to keep her distance from him , and by that I mean that she didn't fall at his feet at first sight like in her previous life, he somehow became interested in her and fell in love with her..... so basically what he really wanted was a game of playing hard to get!! And the fl was even more disappointing. Just before comitting suicide she vowed to not fall for him next time but the moment she sees him she forgets all that. I get it that it's hard to forget your love and all that but her attitude still got on my nerves. The feelings between the MCs were not of love but more like infatuation. The only reason that they got together was because the ml saw the fl before meeting his original love interest from his previous life
5 stars for your innovative plot author... Too good... Previous villainess can be the female lead if she gets second chance, and also can be loved by the male lead because it's all about time.. I like your idea of the story being short.. but it's too good... please finish the story...lots of love 🤗❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
The story is lovely and exciting, a good read and a far better page turner in my case... My only problem was how bad the grammar was that it sometimes broke my mind visualization due to me getting bothered as ro how misplaced the words are; but that is just my case. I recommend this book for those who are suckers for a good romance and intrigue, for those who do not mind a number of quite detailed and affecting sex scenes and aren't bothered at all at gramatical errors (which are quite alot in this book, but it is understandable as this is not the authors first language).
I really like this story. The only issue that I can think is that at the begins is too fast. The is not a specific reason for the sudden change in behave of the male lead. I read 40 chapter and I like the chimic between the protagonists, but everything is too fast. A second issue is the excessive dominance of the males character for not apparent reason. Anyway the story is cute and I like there is a twist about the original female lead. Overall a good lecture, but need a good editor.