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By chapter 12, MC saves a young master. The young master was wearing a disguise, turns out he is a she. She wakes up, punches MC in face since she is naked on top.... MC explains he saved her life. She thanks him. They end up flirting, hugging, kissing and she says "Be gentle" while MC gives her the meatπ. Garbage writing like this is what bothers me. Way too forced. Romance was insanely rushed.... MC even has a damn soul bond with a half demon-half celestial wolf puppy by saving the mom Wolf who has a total of 15million HP. More crappy & forced than the most garbage cultivation novel. I had to drop it. Do not bother at all.
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Very difficult read. Character creation is a bit rough. Also plot holes make you just go "what just happened?" To top it off with grammatical errors every other sentence. If you can get through all that, then you can finally get to a clichΓ© filled story that is hard to follow. Gave it a good effort. Was too much a struggle for these eyes of mine...
The story is OKAY, however, every once in a while I start thinking "this is garbage". There was a chapter that talked about how you won't be able to kill a monster if you hit the leg when it's HP is at 1. There was a whole tangent about how this was real life and whatnot...I digress. The main thing that caught me off guard is that he has been in the first woods he landed in for five plus years. You would think he would have figured that out by now. Another aspect is when he gets his class. He was suppose to have been battered by the elements, but reading that chapter I felt the author might have well just given him the class. The first element was fire, it was meant to burn his soul and body and that somewhat portrayed. He just clenched his teeth and withstood it. Thing is, how could he. He was a regular person, before the reincarnation, spent five plus years in the woods to level (by the way only getting to about 15, which is bull...five year and only 15 when the first monster he kills gets him like 9 levels), then you are expected to feel like he's a tough dude. Didn't get that. I mean fire, water, wind, earth, metal, ect. was attacking his soul and body, and you expect me to believe he just clenched his teeth and withstood it from some inner strength? Nah. If you had made it a point in those five year he was in the woods to toughen the MC mentally and physically...then yeah, I'll buy it...but you didn't. And the skills that the wolf passed to him, the heal, purify and the others, I can get how that can happen. I mean the wolf is supposedly bad ass. I can get behind that. Thing is we are never really explained to of how skills get around, how they are passed, conditions, ect. It just seems like anyone can pass skills around like that if they have a technique, which I'm guessing is a no. So, I would have like to have seen more in the shape of an explanation of what skills are, how do you get them, can you get a skill outside you class, can you work towards a skill or do they just use skills books. Also, I get the felling that there is no order...or rather no reason as to why he has done a lot of the things he's done and if there were it's not really well written out. This novel tries to make the MC mysterious, but in the end it fails..with the whole "No Name" alias he uses in the brothel, I get that his status screen doesn't have a name for him, but that alias is just dumb. Overall, this story tires, but fails in my opinion.
Just started. Only read a few chapters . But I am already thinking of dropping it. The grammar is horrible. And from the comments I have seen, the author hasn't hired an editor or done anything to fix this for the last 8 months. For those not bothered by horrible grammar give it a try. For me, it's a deal-breaker.
Translation is like its generated by machinenovel And story is just dumb He is literally playing a game He is another world but his previous world knowledge is the best......WTF And that scene when he was in the cave with the girl ..it was like she was waiting for him to sleep with her... like he just touched her once and she pulled her clothes open for him to do her....WTF this novel is just waste of time!!
I liked this story. It's really good. The author does a good job. But now something strange happend all chapters, which were yesterday (3/7/2019) without any sign of locked/unlocked chapter mark, are now (3/8/2019) locked as Premium. In all other story I follow all chapters stayed free or are atleast marked as unlocked. Only new chapters are locked with a Spirt Stone pricetag. Now I'm focusing on my other stories for the time beeing and might comeback later again - maybe not.
ok if you are looking in reviews then to be honest the novel is as usual a Isekai op mc novel where there is no logic for events and if you think about why you should not read this novel because mc meats a divine wolf at chapter 6 so you get what am saying little bit work and here's is our mc with op level powers I kinda think that now days novels are less focus on story and making mc op from start fell kinda Iretating well I also like op mc like solo leveling and second life ranker but the mc in the start are not as op as this novel and I also forgot mention mc is also like man
Why did you have to choose human which atomically makes me drop the damn story since itβll be hella boring. You should have never given Demons, Dragons or fairies as a option since it only shows the reader that the author couldβve made a interesting and cool character but instead opted for a human...
Most people are commenting about later on i got to chapter 5 but feel like I have missed about 100 nothing makes sense or it does to the me but not to the reader as nothing is explained and I mean nothing he dies and is told he will reincarnate to a world and that world will be random and he will get a power, does he check to see what his power is no because apparently he will lose his memories(not sure when we are told that but ok) then he choses the worst world to go to because of a reason he knows. Yep he chose it because we just ignore the fact that the world is meant to be random oh and if he loses his memories he won't even know why he should of chosen that world but OK, skip to him landing on the new world it works like a game he knows it acts like a game and thinks that's normal , wait what the actual **** is this story writing I got to him pulling some magic out of his ass and getting a transforming wolf girl dog thing before I gave up don't even bother trying if your actually after a story