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Poorly translated with wuxia-like jargons. I'm only adding 5 stars to balance the reviews out and because I'm not that particular about grammar. I care more about the author's ability to tell their story, and the author of this fanfic does a good job with that, imo. It starts kicking off at around 200 chapters when the canon timeline begins. By then, the characters and MC's background is already fleshed out and the initial part feels more like a prologue, making the pay-off and start of Luffy's journey 100x better. than 99% of One Piece fanfics. The MC joins Luffy, not as a stranger but as someone who is deeply ingrained in the One Piece world, due to him existing years before the timeline starts. By the time Luffy sets sail, the MC already has a reputation as well as connections with the various canon characters, making the small tweaks in canon events along their journey something to look forward to.
Una traducción terrible, imposible disfrutar de la lectura, si vas a hacer algo hazlo bien o no lo hagas directamente, por mi parte solo llegué a leer hasta el capítulo 51 dado que no podía obligarme a seguir leyendo, lo intente realmente pensé que mejoraría la traducción pero no lo hace, en conclusión este fan-fic apesta
Lin Tian, who had reincarnated into the world of One Piece ten years ago met Garp, who was on duty to eradicate pirates, and become his student. In the past ten years, Lin Tian has lived his life as a Marine Soldier and has experienced many amazing adventures and battles in the Grand Line. However, due to the World Nobles incident that shook the world, he became rebellious against the Marine until seriously injured. He escaped and met Luffy, who had formed a small pirate crew, and became Luffy's vice-captain in that pirate crew. He returns to the Grand Line and begins a new journey with Luffy as his captain. Lin Tian became accustomed to playing the role of a vice-captain who always made plans, had unreliable captains, and always acted before thinking what exciting things would happen...
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A really really great story!!! There's not much One Piece story where MC became a great marine (admiral) first then later became Luffy vice/deputy captain... I love how Lin Tian not became strong suddenly (became OP), he need many years until he can fight with many strong people like Whitebeards, Rayleigh, Shanks, 3 Admirals, etc.. I love how he became Garp disciple and have his own moral (killing a bad pirates and realese a good pirates/not kill innocents), he even kill the World Nobles to avenge his bestfriends 👍👍 I also like how he have a brotherhood bonds with Luffy and Ace.. He also have good relationship with his peers in marine... I don't mind Lin Tian have many interest, but I hope it's not become a harem.. Just make him with Carly/Ain or Hancock, or even Ai Siqi or Nami, not all of them 😁😁😁 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 👍👍👍😍😍😁😁