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Very good novel, but it definitely needs some editing (Especially in the early chapters, I've noticed it gets a bit better near the 20s).

Yeah this is not it it. i would not recommend this even to waste Time.

What can I say? I love cats, been reading this one on the sides for a little while, don't let the low reviews trick you into thinking this read is not fun. It might be a bit rough around the edges, but i want to believe the author is slowly improving and becoming better, because its clear he geniunely enjoys his writing. The adventure so far has been quite good, the mc is balanced and i love cats... Wait, I said that already.

Honestly, from what I read, it was terrible. The author comes off to me as grinding for money more than creating an interesting world. The character started off as a character I would've loved to learn about and then reincarnated into a 2d boring cat, and that's saying something because I love cats. The author practices a thorough writing style of tell not show so I often feel quite bored reading as i don't get much to paint the world in my mind and little interaction between the world and his actions cause me to care little about what he does. for a kitten who has incredibly overpowered stats he seems to be surrounded by an incredible tough environment since he rarely accidently breaks things with his newfound strength despite never training to control it. His interactions with system should be funny when it repeatable calls it dumb and yet it only serves to bore me further because a page full of caps lock follows that seems more like a middleschoolers playful tangent then a real interaction between two characters. To top it off the grammar is so horrendous that I question whether I actually want to continue reading after every single paragraph. This wouldn't be such a problem if the author struggled with English or something but there is literally a free app which they could download that would make there book 100 times more grammatically correct. TLDR: Good start turned bad story, Shallow characters, tell not show writing style, horrendous grammar, deceitful and greedy author

Dude you keep updating but it is repeating same chapter. Aur bhai auto correct chalu karle bahot spelling mistakes hai. Everything else is good,the world development is also a nice category. And the character development is also fine. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Ive read everything that isn't locked behind powerstones and there are so many spelling, grammar, and sentence structure issues it was hard to follow let alone get immersed in.

I like the premise and the plot, even though its pretty much nonexistent right now, but what I’m having problem is the the grammar and a lot of “swearing”. Normally I won’t really say anything about swearing in a novel because it’s a perfectly normal thing to do, but doing it at least twice in EVERY single sentences is idk about y’all, is much for me. I would have rated this higher if the author didn’t put 4 “no chapters” to keep their upload schedule which I think is absolutely horrendous, anyways this novel has a pretty good plot, bad execution. Could have been much better imo

Super promising start, but I got to say wholeheartedly that the grammar killed the enthusiasm for this story. When you have to backtrack or use your own logic 3-4 times over to get a picture of what you are trying to write, it's bad.

You might find him a bit annoying at first but he improves later on in the story. I honestly like how the story is going so far since I can’t predict what he’s planning next. AND HES A CAT!! One of my fav animals

Updates are soooo sloooow I might forget that this novel exists soon, would have given 5 stars otherwise

Love this book but I’ woundering when your going to update the DNO chapters.

As much as I love this book, it has over 50 DNO chapters. (Do not buy) and it’s really sad because they haven’ properly updated the book in like a month or two

As you are all aware, there were a significant number of errors scattered throughout the first thirty chapters however, as of right now, each and every one of those errors has been rectified. I hope that you will have a better time reading now, and I hope that you will enjoy the Novel.

Read up to 10 chapters but gave up after encountering to many grammar and spelling issues

first of all, I will preface by saying I only read to chapter 24 and no further. my thoughts on this story is that it has potential to become something quite good, however, there's a significant problem about giving the MC immortality as it removes most threats to them and can eventually make the story pretty boring. also, you made him far too powerful right off the bat. with every superhero, there has to be a kryptonite. without this, the character won't grow and become an interesting character for readers to become attached to. you've done a pretty good job at setting up some future events, but as of right now, the mc has no motivation to do anything. not only is that not engaging for the reader, but it's also going to affect the author. if the author doesn't love their character/story, neither will the reader. also, the spelling and grammar in this story is horrendous. find an editor.

The story might have potential but the writing quality is pretty bad. Hard to read. I might read it later on if the sentences become readable since I like the premise.

What are you an old man? Why are there still sexist beliefs in novels in the age we live in. Anyway, nothing much to say, if you can't deal with sexist beliefs, avoid this novel. If you're fine with it or believe that woman are inferior, go right ahead.

This is a bad to mediocre novel at best which would be fine if it wasn't for the god awful grammar, oh and let me remind you this is a paid novel! you have yo spend real money to read this...sigh wouldn't recommend.

The story idea is good, but the grammatical mistakes makes it hard for me to connect with the story. Plot is also good and flows somewhat fluidly.

currently loving the story. Keep up the good work.