Review from the author. I like this concept so far and hope it continues. The story moves at a slower pace but shows more detail which is what I like. The characters are likeable and relatable(for some), they all suffer from their own problems. The flow and writing skills get better as the story goes on. There is foreshadow and details that affect the future. The world so far is pretty utopian but that's maybe because it's mostly wilderness exploring so far, but the world-building is good so far. Notes. I am busy and have a bit of trouble writing so the chapter output isn't the best; you can expect 2-4 chapters best weekly. The chapters are 1000+ and don't go over 2000 words. Since my schedule isn't the best, I can't get contracted unless some miracle happened, so chapters will be free for a long time. That's it from me, have a good day and hope it goes well for you.
OK, I have to say, you've created a very terrifying protagonist. Good job on that front. The system of races and threat levels is a little much at the beginning, but if you slowly introduce it throughout the chapters you'll be fine. Just have someone check your spelling and you're golden. Keep up the good work.