the story is new for me. you know the setting and plot itself. I also like the imagery but i think that the more you write, the more you'll develop this particular skill. for me, the story still lacks the emotion but i also know that you will get better with it. language wise, i could clearly see that you have a command in using the english language. overall, i really love it. even for a novice like you. keep it up!
Personally, I really like the plot because it’s very exciting. It makes you think about what’s going to happen next. The author’s writing style is also creative, I like it. The author is very hardworking and imaginative. The scene transitions are sometimes smooth and slow. and also, the characters are hands down awesome, especially the male lead hahahahahaha. -Your SenSenpai, KKA
Hellooo! haha. So, I've made a decision to rate my own book well because as what they'd say, you have to love your own, right? So, yeah. I want to ask, what do you think about my story? I really hope that you guys would enjoy it. Feel free to leave comments and constructive criticisms. I really want to know and learn more. Thank you! muah ❤