legendaryray5
It's great so far but please don't make Raphael tell Rimuru everything that will happen maybe just small bits. The writing quality is fine. updates I'm not sure only at ch11 but seems average. Story development it's one of the reasons I kept on reading it's really good. World background I haven't gotten far enough maybe and I feel like it's fine but author could change the POV bit more. Character design I don't know what to say since it's just a copy of Rimuru and the other characters of re zero but it's fine idk.