Orionwashere
Okei he meets Merlin and talks to him melin trusts him easily because he is also a wizard I can handle it but you meet Gaius and he writes you a recommendation?Why? Because he finds you nice? he doesn't even know you, And then suddenly you have a room next to Morgana? Does that mean you'll be let into the castle?! Because a doctor writes you a recommendation and not only that you even have a room next to the king's ward? That doesn't make any sense you are an unknown, Uther kills people for far less, he would never let a stranger into the castle let alone near Morgana, magic is forbidden in Camelot, times are troubled, Caius has become very wise through his long experience with Uther and magic. the way you present your characters is strange logic and rationality do not count here I recommend a rewrite, take a look again at the Series might help I know that this is a fan fic, but you have to build some logic and reason behind it otherwise your story does not make the slightest sense There is not much to see here
As fellow Merlin fan I MUST criticize you: Why, just why did it say "this work doesn't support power stones" I don't have much but I really wished to appreciate your work with them. So it's your own fault, you've pushed so far, to the brink of side-splitting So... Here we go: Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» Good job Good work Good work of art ππ»ππ»ππ» And compliments to the fellow fandom memberπ