The story itself is fine and The characters are portrayed in a believable way, but the lack of spaces between sentences completely ruins the entire feel of the sotry. There should be a space after every punctuation.
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
it's a very good tensura fic I couldn't find many good one's and there aren't many fanfiction of it please don't drop this fic author atleast try to complete it many people drop them after some starting chapters....