WayneSteine
Let's start with writing quality. I can see the type of comedy and self awareness your going for and I absolutely love it. It plays in a similar fashion to konosuba which is a really funny story. I can't say much about the update stability since it's only 13 chapters in but waiting isn't really an issue for me. The story is fast paced and is executed relatively well. The character descriptions are very detailed, which I like. World background is very descriptive but can be a little confusing at times. Overall great comedic story and a good quick read if you like this type of genre and story.
Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!
This is a great story so far if you're looking for a fast paced story, a MC that goes for any opportunity he can take, great character development, a little confusing but understandable background, little to no grammatical errors, and quite a bit of research that goes into this book. Overall, a great Marvel fanfiction.
Writing Quality -Unique -Creative -The use of uncommon descriptive words gives a pinch of interest to the reader. Update -Five stars cause why not? Character Development -MC is perfect and lovable. -Characters are described vividly Story development -The pace is not slow nor fast, it's perfect and unique World background -It was described vividly. -It keeps me captivated and motivated to yearn for more chapters. Overall: Keep up the goodwork!
The shameless author here, this is just my first book upon which I want to dump all the ideas I have on my head playing about keeping me up all night on all the what if's and possible scenario a reincarnated MC in the Marvel-verse can do to survive such situations. Will try and stick to the timelines of canon MCU and Comic-verse(616) but will have some changes as any future knowledge person will surely do in any timelines. Please leave a review, power stone, comment and ratings! THANKS!