If you are a reader like me who browses through reviews to understand wether or not to read a novel? Well you are in luck , because this review is for u 1) The book is a cross of VR x Apocalypse and one of the most unique concepts i have ever seen which is rounded up beautifully by avans. 2) The grammar and writing quality is impeccable and the book is written by a top 10 author on this platform so update stability is a gaurantee. 3) The chapters are gripping and you want to keep reading more and more and more , so if you are a binge reader like me , this book will torture you 4) It's nothing like you have ever seen before , there are no comparables to this book , a top tier classic for sure . 100% read it the first chance u get!
So for now the story is going in a good direction, the plot has potential in my opinion and I'm looking forward to the sequel but author [spoiler alert] do you plan to develop the character as someone helping others? in the last current chaps, he helped Luis and Laura well, although luckily he didn't give them the hidden quest. Afterwards even if I don't like it when people cling to the mc to survive and involve him in bad situations, in this story it increases the realism and the immersion which I find excellent. Finally, I highly recommend it and I look forward to the sequel. Thank you for your work author. -Sorry for my english (i am french) ^^
I really like the story and the suspense building up in the later chapters (Chaps 30ish). One thing I would recommend is to further describe the characters mental states and how they think while reacting to different situations (which is kinda unfair from me to write at this point. But I think a non perfect review will give other potential readers a better view on the story. I hope you continue like you have been till now!
Wow im so happy for a new story if Avans! Just read all the chaps (27 currently at the time if writting). I am loving this story! As always Avans brings supreme quality to his writing and word building. I am ready for another tale weaved by the author who brought us Doomsday Pilliars and Earths Greatest magus! Im ready!!!