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I quite like the beginning and the premise of it. A world in which VR exists and is used for more than just games, though it has entered that frontier too. A story is about a ranker from the first VRMMO game that intends to go to the next one because the first game has finished. It does not seem all that special, but it is a twist that is not really used and I like it. The main character is a normal guy that has friends and a younger brother that will follow him into the game. I like the character design a lot, and have no complaints about it. World background is also interesting although it is just beginning. Fight on author.
These reviews don't really make sense because the story is not yet complete, but this is my initial rate for the author to show my support. Keep up the great work, and I hope that you can see this story through the end. Cheers! If you're interested, I could use some of your help too with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged).
An elaborate story set in two conjoined worlds, virtual and reality come together to form the backdrop. I think this is a pretty high quality book that deserves more than it gets. I didnβt notice any major grammatical mistakes that would disturb the reading experience and enjoyed it through and through. So if youβre wavering to read this I think itβs at least worth to give it a try..
A nice story that I would definitely come back to in the future. Usually, I would have a problem with the System in these kinds of stories, but that problem is fortunately nonexistent here. The only problem I would have is with the flow, as it gets somewhat rocky in certain parts. The chapters are also a bit too long for my liking, but that would differ from person to person. Overall, great job!
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