Raiding the Blood Furnace

Follow a young kid trapped on a planet that is being cultivated for as game sight by his father’s company. I really can’t say much more about yet. My stories develop as I write them and there isn’t any set game plan. The sky is the limit and I won’t know what will happen from one minute to the next. First review is completed on the first 42 chapters. I fixed a lot of the grammar issues and clarified a few things. Hopefully it’s easier to read. If you like what you read or hate it please leave a note. Drop a review etc. this is my first attempt at writing on a plate form like this so y’all can see the process as it develops.