First of all... pretty cover! I read this up to chapter 6. So far, it was still early to tell about this novel. However, the writing is good. I especially love the way the author described the character's movement and emotions. But wow, there is a lot of cursing in this story. This is an exciting read. I'm looking forward to the plot development. Good luck, author!
Though not a fan of romance oriented novels, this one is really good. The first five chapters I've read so far, are well written. The quality is fantastic, the characters are well fitted, the storyline is progressing well, so far and the world building is good. Just on a side note, it's better to be engaging the readers in conversation. Especially, through the author's note before publishing. Excellent job, my fellow author.