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Lakaya_Phillips
Lakaya_PhillipsLv1Lakaya_Phillips

I literally can't wait for more this is sooooooooo good. Is she going to find out? Is he the love interest in the story and when do you update? Five out of five for sure.

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DeusVult001
DeusVult001Lv1DeusVult001

You have kept to short paragraphs, good. It makes it easier to follow and suited to a faster pace for suspense and action. The opening paragraph is good, as opening statements are important to catch the reader.

zetsubouaichan
zetsubouaichanLv14zetsubouaichan

First of all... pretty cover! I read this up to chapter 6. So far, it was still early to tell about this novel. However, the writing is good. I especially love the way the author described the character's movement and emotions. But wow, there is a lot of cursing in this story. This is an exciting read. I'm looking forward to the plot development. Good luck, author!

Primate
PrimateLv4Primate

Though not a fan of romance oriented novels, this one is really good. The first five chapters I've read so far, are well written. The quality is fantastic, the characters are well fitted, the storyline is progressing well, so far and the world building is good. Just on a side note, it's better to be engaging the readers in conversation. Especially, through the author's note before publishing. Excellent job, my fellow author.