Reviews of Quartex The System

Hi guys, the shameless author here giving myself an honest review. Im not so shameless to give me 5 stars as im a pretty new writer. However, I wish to improve my writing ability not only to satisfy my wild imagination but also to help the readers enjoy reading better quality work. Feedback would be great, I'm not afraid of criticism, in fact, I encourage! (But don't be too harsh lol) I'll try keeping at least a 5 Chapters a week, no promises as I tend to get lost within my own story and then want to end up changing things.