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Pursuing My Rejected Alpha

Lu_Shui

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Lu_Shui
Lu_ShuiAuthorLu_Shui

Hi everyone, welcome to my first ever published original story in this genre. It is a story between two alpha werewolves who, despite their opposing natures, love each other deeply. That is what you need to keep in mind while you read, because it is not immediately apparent in the first chapters πŸ˜‰. Enjoy reading and please do support me with collection, power stones, reviews, comments, and golden tickets if you like the story~ Message me in discord if you want to chat ❀️

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Kaname_Kuran_9015
Kaname_Kuran_9015Lv14Kaname_Kuran_9015

Ahhh i love it so much 😍😍😍 Usually when i read novel , at first i found it interesting but i lost interest in the middle and stop , searching for new one but this novel captivate me, Once i started reading i couldn't stop 🀣 want more&more ,always check for update. I Love ronan dan lucien , they fit each other , ronan tantrum and childish behaviour made my day ,he is so funny 🀣🀣 For Kinnon His love for lucien is πŸ‘πŸ‘ he is so mature and want lucien be happy even not with him πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯° (come here kinnon , i'm more than willing to be your wife and love you but u only want lucien😭) thanks author , they don't threesome (Ronan-Lucien-Kinnon) because for me love is 2 person not 3 person πŸ˜…πŸ˜… and for anna hmmm No , untill the end i still don't like her πŸ˜… but she end up with lowell so yeah ok 😬be happy

RobynCardona
RobynCardonaLv10RobynCardona

Wow, I couldn't stop reading. The writing is a m a z i n g! I love the dynamics between the two alphas (*waves Lucien flag*). The world building is stellar and everything feels natural. Background information is brought in subtly and does not impede the story at all. For once, I have no constructive critiscm for the author, everything seems perfect.

Hassy_101
Hassy_101Lv14Hassy_101

I was actually enjoying the book as your style of writing and grammar did justice to the book. However, I can't swallow the thought of man to man relationship. I thought maybe he would start feeling something for Maya, but I guess...

Empzze
EmpzzeLv11Empzze

Amazing introduction, I'm hooked already and I already find myself gushing over Lucien and Ronan, I don't have any prejudice against them being men, because while others see two men I just see two people in love like every other person so great work author, I'm rooting for you😍😍😍 please keep the update coming in.

Gladstone_
Gladstone_Lv13Gladstone_

A great Novel,the world building is perfect The story isn’t progressing at a pace too fast or too slow The author surely did a good job on this one

Sweet_Vanilla553
Sweet_Vanilla553Lv13Sweet_Vanilla553

OMG❀️ Werewolves Alpha LGBT I am done author.This is what I have been carving for his long. The story got me attrached.But I am still in among first 15 chaps.Even though I came here since I felt like it was not early. This is a mind blowing work author. I love to read this kind of stories and your work made me feel so happy. Keep going author.... Update more soon.(But I am still on the way) I will surely continue to read this.....

ZeroX0666
ZeroX0666Lv12ZeroX0666

This story is quite interesting, the writing style is actually well done, with a plot that is interesting to follow. The main character seems fun, and their personality is also enjoyable to see.

Patricia_Levy
Patricia_LevyLv11Patricia_Levy

I am only halfway through chapter three and already I’m hooked. The writing is phenomenal, the characters are unique, and from the first word I didn’t want to stop reading. I highly recommend this book who love an interesting twist.

Marble_Fun_World
Marble_Fun_WorldLv3Marble_Fun_World

Fascinating story, Nice job authorπŸ’―. The characters developed so rapidly, and their Good writing quality. Nice story author, try updating frequently πŸ™

XianjunJie
XianjunJieLv12XianjunJie

There is nothing I can say about this book other than it is an absolute masterpiece. Although the readers are only granted a snippet of the past between the two main characters, their interaction has been, D E L I C I O U S. Mmm.

PEARL_WANG
PEARL_WANGLv11PEARL_WANG

Give it a try readers.....don't just keep reading review......It's a lot fun....New genre for me...you will love it everyone. The writing as everything and has good chemistry.

DaoistvODbDR
DaoistvODbDRLv4DaoistvODbDR

Good job author, the story was flowing and the characters well immersed, it's very intriguing and captivating enough to make me go on and on, I recommend it.

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

I really enjoyed it. This book was unique then other werewolfs stories. The starting didn't felt rushed. So far i like Ronan's character but i don't know about Lucien. So i think you did a great job. I would love to keep reading.

naffan
naffanLv12naffan

An excellent story so far. Interesting since the beginning 10/10 I can’t wait to read more!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Zherie17
Zherie17Lv1Zherie17

So far, story wise, it is a well-written story somehow but put your strange terminologies and other explanations BEFORE the chapter starts/have a dedicated chapter on that so that your future unfamiliar readers can at least recognize and understand them before hand. Paragraph spacing is a must too.

HakkaPoh
HakkaPohLv10HakkaPoh

Both characters so well written and I am really curious to know about their back stories. Keep it up...πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

arshii_sweetie
arshii_sweetieLv1arshii_sweetie

I am waiting for the next, keep it up. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Gwen_Allen
Gwen_AllenLv14Gwen_Allen

This was a won derful story I’ve read this story 3 times so far just wonderful funny sad and wonderful

Debra_Worrell_6570
Debra_Worrell_6570Lv15Debra_Worrell_6570

Excellent story and writing. Loved al of it.l