Iamxourtingdeath
I was enjoying this story even if it had the cliche evil Hiruzen, but I took a break and came back and suddenly it wasn't as entertaining. Especially the thing with Madara. It all felt too quick, the sudden change in character. It would've been nice to see the slow descent into what he becomes, but the more I read the more I think "well this doesn't seem right." Also the things with the jokes or how characters react seems stiff and odd. Maybe I'm in a bad mood or those jokes just weren't for me, maybe the jokes were just bad, but I just wanted to get through the Onoki part. Still a good read though.
Dont waste your time on this trash, dont be fooled by other review that say its good, can you imagine naruto characters speaking like a chinese wuxia/xianxia character, cringed right and someone even says thats the author captured the canon char. personality really well 😂😂, what a joke all i see is a copy paste chinese novel by a 13 year old that has low brain cell readers 🤣. madara and tobirama is so out of characters that i almost puke 🤮 while reading it.
Overall the story is great, I can say that this is one of the best if not the best Naruto fanfictions. And because of the premise it might be one of the best world hoping stories... I personally love this chat group for villains. And I am hoping that more similar concepts are created.. -Great Job Author (P.S.- Dont drop)
Incredibly entertaining! The writing quality is top-notch, as I can see very few grammatical errors if any whatsoever. The update stability is good, easily a 5-star. Story development has been well-paced, and overall has kept me entertained. Character design is interesting, and seems to match their characters should they have been in this situation. And the world background is a '4', simply because I couldn't really find a reason to make it a 5-star. Mainly a lack of background on some worlds except the title. Overall, for me, this got a 4.8.
This is good uhh yeah just good read it and you'll know.. And I hope author San adds new members soon Let me suggest.. Hmmm maybe fy or leylin?? Hahaha dk but I hope so when the mc has enough power he can add fy so he let's him refine some luck path gu that let him steal some luck from other hapless protag haha so they can be like villain's with a son of destiny perk blahbah haha anyways that kinda cools..