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Weak plot with OP system and strange decisions. A lot questioning about it: Why MC is not Prince of Dragonstone? Why so OP gacha hero? Why grammar and building of sentences sometimes break readers brain? With all due respect, plot and conception needs rework. Now it's too basic and illogical with a lot plot missteps
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The story is complicated to read and understand. Until now I don't know exactly who the protagonist is and neither when he speaks, thinks or acts. It would be great if the author separated the chapters into more paragraphs; a speaking character is one paragraph, the same acting character is another paragraph, and then a separate paragraph for another speaking, acting, or thinking character. Although I do not recommend doing internal dialogues because they bore and divert the story. Another problem is the meaningless and self-injurious decisions of the protagonist. why give away all the gold and valuable goods? There is no sense and although the protagonist has a system, that does not mean that he should make the other kingdoms rich without any benefit.