Reviews of Princess Pavitra Journey To The Throne

A fantastic example of a writer using their own style and what they're proficient into their advantage. These are the types of books that're good examples of proper nominations for the WSA (especially after last year's fiasco.) Writing Quality: Excellent writing quality. The sentence structure is well-thought-out with transitions that have meaning, allowing the reader to feel invested in the story. A few unnecessary indents such as the POV transitions (as the reader we're able to determine who's talking and where) as well as some misspells but those can be fixed. Updating Stability: To early to say. However, my advice would be, if you already aren't, to stockpile chapters since you seem to be releasing +1 chapters on the day-to-day. Start making announcements saying you'll release 2 chapters next week if you get 10 powerstones as well as participating in TGIF for mass-releasing. You are working on two novels during WSA unfortunately, and with the 100k word eligibility, it's quite a stunt to pull. But looking at your current strides you seem to be doing fine. Story Development: The author has an intriguing way of describing a lot in between scenes. That could lead to me sometimes forgetting the premise of what's happening and focusing more on the writing than the story. This isn't a bad thing, just something to take into account as it'll be looked at as a "slow burner." Some readers might like this niche but if a book has the tags "Action" and "Fantasy" I prefer a bit of fast-pacing in specific scenes. Character Design: You're able to gain a sense of humanity from all the characters. Overconfident princes, Soft-spoken kings, and Prideful princesses allow the reader to form a connection with the characters. World Background: If I could give more stars I would. The imagery is magnificent. Each room or place being observed by the reader has detailed imagery to explain the surroundings but not too much to bore me from reading. In conclusion, amazing book and I'm glad to have the chance to compete against someone with your amazing talent. I've learned a lot from this book alone on what I need to work on imagery-wise to stay ahead of the competition. Good luck, Author-sama. I'll be watching <3

Excellent novel! The way the characters have been portrayed, the way the plot is taking turn, it is just amazing. The way the whole thing is being expressed and being out out there is mind blowing. having fun reading it. Definitely should give it a read, it is worth every second<3

the first chapter isn't ur typical start with a boom but takes its time to set us up with who the FL is and what she can do, while also hinting on her sad and interestinf past.. i already love her and i look forward to her journey to the throne💖

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Well. A very good story. I looked at the title and started reading and finished reading all 43 of them. There a few things I would like to say about this book: 1. The story suddenly jumps from third person narration to first person narration which is confusing. So, I suggest that the author check for such errors before publishing. 2. some words are missing; thereby forcing us to pause to fill up those words. Perhaps a little more review could help solve this. 3. Spelling errors could be avoided with as I said a bit more review. 4. The writer is obviously more experienced in writing on this platform so she constantly keeps reminding her readers which I feel is a bit unnecessary. Maybe it is necessary; I do not know. 5. The story did make me feel like stop writing my current books and just spend the rest of my life just reading!

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INTERESTING NOVEL!!! I love Princess Pavita! I got hooked with her intro!! Not only is she the youngest mage but also a capital and commander of another regiment! She's a character that you can't help but love. Besides her strong side, you can also feel her humane side and explore more about her as the story progresses. I enjoyed the plot and the writing a lot.

I enjoyed the rollercoaster Pavrita is going through, showed that even a Princess has her human side. Im shocked with the plot twist, which is a great thing because I cant predict how the story would goes and it made it even interesting!! all the best author and may the spirity spirit guides you to success 😍

It's a good read and a page turner. A must try I say and I really love princess pavitra's character and I can't wait to see more of her journey. She had noble purpose and it's not just revenge but love. She was discouraged but instead she chooses to be challenged.

Definitely worth reading! The world building of this novel is perfect! I can't help but root for Princess Pavitra and her journey to showcase her magic to everyone!

the story kept me hooked since start, the impact was good, well described and well written this book has the gold winning abilty, best of luck to the author and pavitra for their journey.

the story is well planned and plotted, the world background was easy to understand and characters were well established,. the story has a lot of potential

the story is full of suspense, mystery and drama, i love the vibe of it. it make me want to know more and more. it is well written and plotted. good work author

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