Mel_Aniv
I want to be clear. I've been here for a long time and have read hundreds of novels. But I have never read a novel with battle scenes illustrated in such an epic and fluent style like this! I would like to especially congratulate the author of this book. Your novel took its place at the top of my collection...[img=update]
Woah this really one of the great stories that have been hiding are around in the pile of bad stories that i see in front. The Mc very mature from the usual beta mc i see in many stories, the writing hmm very decent it seem to me that author have read a lot of action & adventure novels, the battle scene of the story is very illustrated, that hoock me in. Overall looking foward to this to be at the top or even in feature section of wn [img=recommend]
I really enjoyed the narrative, the switch between the scenes was smooth and easy to imagine. I like how the MCis the focus from the start. He is a man with great past, not a usual beta guy. I don't know why I got some John Wick vibe out of him, but it should be considered as a compliment. It's written in a very mature and logical way, that it really makes me want to read more. It's rare for me to click with the MC so fast! Rather than being curious about his past, I just want to see his interaction with other characters, or just him being alone and dping his own stuff as an observer. I'm getting weird..... haha He is so attractive from a female's viewpoing *cough* mine viewpoint but yeah, take it with my two cents if he ever cheats on his lover, lol. Keep up the good work, your novel is one of the better ones on this site. Even one of the best when the time comes.
Rebirth Novels are one of the most difficult novels to write out there. The author makes it so simple and easy to understand. And as for the flow, It is one of the best one out there. Definitely not the Jack and Joe novels out there. This novel is so interesting that I have stopped reading my current novel so that I could read it. Plot: amazing. Character development: almost perfect Story development: Best out there
The novel has been written very elaborately and I really like the way how much effort author has put into it to make the scenes as much interesting as possible. Although there still lies some scope of improvement in his writing skills, I hope he'll get better at it soon. Good luck author with your upcoming chapters[img=recommend]
I'm not a fan of thriller and action novels, but this one is an exception. The detailed fights and action, the superb writing style of the author not to mention the outstanding imagery- AAAAA I'm here for it. I am a fan of fantasy novels, so I am definitely loving this. Great work author, I'll add this to my library.
Do GIVE IT A TRY FIRST,, FOR ME TO HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT NOVEL IS WHAT I TRY TO FIND, AND YESS THIS STORY HAS IT WHAT it takes to be a great novel, the author is learning and correcting his mistakes, i am one of the very first readers of the author and the story is now being developed well,
Here is my review based on what I read so far about this book: Story Development: I think the direction for this story is quite clear and I felt each chapters of this story keep moving forward or should I said very steady. Character Design: The description of the character for me is pretty okay and The Main Character is mostly fine. Overall, I can see some potential within the main character especially that he has a journey. However, I think you can explore more about his true motivation. While the side characters are just fine, it's just only needs more context or showing who they really are. World Background: The world background is fine, but I think you should give more context or description of the environment because it's so far it's clear, but not really enough in terms how I would imagine the world. That's all I have to say about this novel and keep up the good work!!
The first few chapters are very mysterious, interesting, and action packed. Not only that, the writing is pretty good and the author does a pretty good job of describing and setting the scene. There are a few grammatical errors and odd sentence struture here and there, but overall its a very interesting read. I look forward to reading more chapters. Good work, auhtor.
This story is fast-paced and gets you right into the action. The premise of the world and the potential that Troan has with his memories from his past lives really make you excited about how amazing he will be in the future. Definitely recommending this to anyone who likes to read fantasy stories that had a unique premise, rich worldbuilding, and fast-paced actions!