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Primordial Versatile Grandmaster

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Dianara_Brillantes_3388
Dianara_Brillantes_3388Lv1Dianara_Brillantes_3388

I want to be clear. I've been here for a long time and have read hundreds of novels. But I have never read a novel with battle scenes illustrated in such an epic and fluent style like this! I would like to especially congratulate the author of this book. Your novel took its place at the top of my collection...[img=update]

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0Mashroom
0MashroomLv30Mashroom

Woah this really one of the great stories that have been hiding are around in the pile of bad stories that i see in front. The Mc very mature from the usual beta mc i see in many stories, the writing hmm very decent it seem to me that author have read a lot of action & adventure novels, the battle scene of the story is very illustrated, that hoock me in. Overall looking foward to this to be at the top or even in feature section of wn [img=recommend]

Dianara_Brillantes
Dianara_BrillantesLv1Dianara_Brillantes

I really enjoyed the narrative, the switch between the scenes was smooth and easy to imagine. I like how the MCis the focus from the start. He is a man with great past, not a usual beta guy. I don't know why I got some John Wick vibe out of him, but it should be considered as a compliment. It's written in a very mature and logical way, that it really makes me want to read more. It's rare for me to click with the MC so fast! Rather than being curious about his past, I just want to see his interaction with other characters, or just him being alone and dping his own stuff as an observer. I'm getting weird..... haha He is so attractive from a female's viewpoing *cough* mine viewpoint but yeah, take it with my two cents if he ever cheats on his lover, lol. Keep up the good work, your novel is one of the better ones on this site. Even one of the best when the time comes.

The_little_boy
The_little_boyLv3The_little_boy

Rebirth Novels are one of the most difficult novels to write out there. The author makes it so simple and easy to understand. And as for the flow, It is one of the best one out there. Definitely not the Jack and Joe novels out there. This novel is so interesting that I have stopped reading my current novel so that I could read it. Plot: amazing. Character development: almost perfect Story development: Best out there

Nat_Su_8137
Nat_Su_8137Lv1Nat_Su_8137

Again thanks to the author for continuing , the story has a lot of potential and unique. The is kinda getting more and more intresting. I hope the author never drops it. Continue it.

Sneakycat098
Sneakycat098Lv2Sneakycat098

The novel has been written very elaborately and I really like the way how much effort author has put into it to make the scenes as much interesting as possible. Although there still lies some scope of improvement in his writing skills, I hope he'll get better at it soon. Good luck author with your upcoming chapters[img=recommend]

Scorpious_star
Scorpious_starLv1Scorpious_star

The synopsis itself speaks about how amazing the story is... I have read the book and am serious that it is a fun ride.. I liked the way the Author made things clear to understand dospite the plot being a little hard... I loved reading every bit of it and am waiting for more... 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

AmoreMimosi_001
AmoreMimosi_001Lv2AmoreMimosi_001

Highly recommended 👌,I like how the book keeps me glued to it, also that I like rebirth stories. It's has great writing quality, character designs and the story development is cool too, can't wait for more 💫.

trumpet_creeper01
trumpet_creeper01Lv1trumpet_creeper01

Fantastic. Really a great story I've read till now. Enjoyed every bit I read till now. The actions scenes were smooth and the emotions of character were portrayed very well. Loved every bit of it. I'm definitely gonna be reading this till the end.

nileson
nilesonLv4nileson

I really like the plot. First of all I am the biggest fan of rebirth novel. in this novel you can see that author has defined the character very well i am looking forward to upcoming chapters All the best Author

Surbhi_mithil
Surbhi_mithilLv2Surbhi_mithil

Though I don't like actions novel but this is quite good to read. The narrative way of author is nice. Be surely read more chapters of it. Great work author.

Eva_Smith_0875
Eva_Smith_0875Lv1Eva_Smith_0875

Your story is extraordinary. I love your storyline. your story gains too many views it is really great. keep it up. I am waiting for the next publication from your side.

Miss_Asriya
Miss_AsriyaLv1Miss_Asriya

I'm not a fan of thriller and action novels, but this one is an exception. The detailed fights and action, the superb writing style of the author not to mention the outstanding imagery- AAAAA I'm here for it. I am a fan of fantasy novels, so I am definitely loving this. Great work author, I'll add this to my library.

Nat_Su_8137
Nat_Su_8137Lv1Nat_Su_8137

Do GIVE IT A TRY FIRST,, FOR ME TO HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT NOVEL IS WHAT I TRY TO FIND, AND YESS THIS STORY HAS IT WHAT it takes to be a great novel, the author is learning and correcting his mistakes, i am one of the very first readers of the author and the story is now being developed well,

JJ_Prakoso
JJ_PrakosoLv1JJ_Prakoso

Here is my review based on what I read so far about this book: Story Development: I think the direction for this story is quite clear and I felt each chapters of this story keep moving forward or should I said very steady. Character Design: The description of the character for me is pretty okay and The Main Character is mostly fine. Overall, I can see some potential within the main character especially that he has a journey. However, I think you can explore more about his true motivation. While the side characters are just fine, it's just only needs more context or showing who they really are. World Background: The world background is fine, but I think you should give more context or description of the environment because it's so far it's clear, but not really enough in terms how I would imagine the world. That's all I have to say about this novel and keep up the good work!!

NotBeatrix
NotBeatrixLv2NotBeatrix

The first few chapters are very mysterious, interesting, and action packed. Not only that, the writing is pretty good and the author does a pretty good job of describing and setting the scene. There are a few grammatical errors and odd sentence struture here and there, but overall its a very interesting read. I look forward to reading more chapters. Good work, auhtor.

Nat_Su_8137
Nat_Su_8137Lv1Nat_Su_8137

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darran_
darran_Lv3darran_

This story is fast-paced and gets you right into the action. The premise of the world and the potential that Troan has with his memories from his past lives really make you excited about how amazing he will be in the future. Definitely recommending this to anyone who likes to read fantasy stories that had a unique premise, rich worldbuilding, and fast-paced actions!

Passingsands
PassingsandsLv2Passingsands

The story of Troan is immersive and the pace is great. These type of novels are hard to write but the author has went beyond expectations and kept every twist and turn connected with the pace. Do keep up the good work!

Fortune_daine
Fortune_daineLv1Fortune_daine

An awesome book by all accounts. Troan has me wondering all sorts of things. pure talent at play here. the updating stability is good. grammar,on point and character design leaves little to desire. I applaud the author. this is a big book in progress.definitely a worthy read.